EndWalkers

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Description

For Verity Monroe, the world ended five years ago with acid rains and fire twisters. And now she's helping to keep it down against her will, until the last bit of humanity is snuffed out.

Except a tip-off from a mysterious figure leads her to a laptop. A Console, in reality, which revealed that the world they lived in was simply a level in a Game. A Game that if they won, would stop every apocalypse in the entire System.

Accompanied by Asadullah Khan, a catshifter from a robot-ridden Level, she and her friends are thrust into worlds of zombies and plagues. They work through the Levels, meet allies, get stronger, all with one goal: Get through the End.

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What to Expect:

- Multiple POVs, but only one POV per chapter

-Updates every day now.

-Diverse cast, own voices in some respects, but not all.

-Fully Pre-Written at 277k words. The last twenty two chapter - which are still being released right now - are purchaseable onko-fifor £1.99

character faces on the cover were created by500 type cut-in makerand approved for use.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: IndigoSparks

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 57
Views: 56,754

Chapters(127 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

CelestiarcRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Endwalkers...
Dear apopcolypse gods... what a title!
If you like LitRPGs then definately give this one a try. The author has a way of really nailing the aesthetic and atmosphere of a post-apopcalyptic wasteland. Seriously, go read the first few paragraphs. Very well written.
The story is interesting with a plot expansion twist (you'll have to read to find out what that is). I loved it. Great concept. Very interesting. Like I already like the plot idea of solving the mystery behind the apopcalypse but... well the expansion just ensures that we will have plenty of time in this world and with these characters!
Speaking of charcters...
My own itsby bitsy teenie weenie complaint.
I want more time with these characters in their element! The plot rushes head long, strong and steady like a train working overtime to reach its destination. You still get amazing characterizations (I mean, how else would I have come to the entitled demanding that we get more time with these characters not having to rush head long into the plot).
The team set up by Stat Check gives real promise to an interesting and fun dynamic that I can't wait for!
Overall, this is a story that's definately worth your time. So go in there read. Comment and support the author so we can get those damned character moments!
FirstNexusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
We start off quickly in the story, with characters and plot points being set up left and right. Everything moves at a quick pace, which is great but the reader isn't left feeling confused or overwhelmed at all.
Style: it's written in a typical system apocalypse style, with more natural earth language and with other POV's the style switches but flows seamlessly from chapter to chapter. Dialogue is written well and character interactions set up personalities perfectly.
Story: As stated above, the story is quick paced and introduces the plot from different angles. I like the different dimensional take on the system apocalypse genre and I love the fact that I have no idea how the premise of it works and why the apocalypse exists because it's something the reader will get to explore with the characters.
Grammar: I haven't seen any issues or anything that would throw me off. Everything is written well
Character score: I think with an apocalypse story, it can be difficult to focus on multiple main characters, but the author does incredibly well at introducing and setting up each MC. Though Verity might be in the synopsis, this story is about all of the Endwalkers (which is a great title btw) and the story so far has given each of its characters importance within the squad.
All in all, I like the premise of this story and will be following along!
PelgraineRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This has been such a delight to read that I feel lucky that it’s been made available for us on the internet. It’s been thoroughly entertaining so far. I’m rather hoping this blows up and turns into a TV show or movie because it’s that good.
The world building is top notch, the characters distinct and well-crafted without seeming overpowered, and the plot wholly enthralling. The merging of fantasy aspects with the technological remnants of a post-apocalyptic world have been admirably executed.
Reading this story made me feel like I was right there with the characters, walking alongside them. Having the different perspectives of the main characters from chapter to chapter was excellent as, having enriched our understanding of their respective motivations and backgrounds, it then made their respective efforts to become a cohesive unit all the sweeter. I also really enjoyed the fact that the characters didn’t start of as all-powerful or incredibly knowledgeable; it made the journey of learning how their new RPG world worked seem more authentic, if I can put it that way, and therefore was more engaging.
Would give this one 6 out of 5 stars if I could.
S.nufflesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Imagine finding out every single dimension was f***** I think I'd just give up.
Style: is pretty good. Not necessarily poetic or stylistic, but for this story I don't think it needed to be. It uses a cheeky metaphor here and there to really hammer home descriptions, and I enjoyed how things are described and how the writing style services the mysteries its setting
Grammar: is strong. Nothing wrong here.
Story: is really interesting. A whole theory of a game where you have to solve every apocalypse to reverse your own. It's new and interesting, however I think the simple scale of it needs to be expanded on a little more. Usually post-apocalyse stories have entire passages of world building and that's just one universe. We shall have to see.
Character: is intruiging so far. I like Verity, mainly because she's got a head screwed onto her shoulders, and there's an entire underlying something going on with her. But, I just wish that the rest of the cast (apart from Asadullah) had as good of a first impression. Although, it's the early chapters I don't blame the author.
Overall: I would just be out as soon as the apocalypse happened imma be real.
The_TripointRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The title is this way because of the great characters in the cast, especially the ever-so-charismatic Jared.
It follows a cast of survivors in a post-apocalyptic world, that found a strange computer. The laptop, it's...well, it's weird. It teleports people, and commands a game.
But that's how this cast of survivors gets together. Through the game.
This story thus has a lot of potential, since many realities would definitely appear as it goes on. And thus, more mysteries to solve in order to solve the apocalypse. It appears that they would be going through a lot. Right now, they are stuck in a zombie-infested world. Interestingly too are these sub-levels. They seem to be separate from the main realities, which let me tell, it's a good way to implement the side quests usually present in games.
It should also help make the grind feel more varied. Because let's be honest here, reading about repetitive stuff (or playing through it) through grinding, is a pain.
The style was awesome. The way he highlighted the parts connected to the game system made things clearer. I also like the occasional inserts of humor.
Not really a lot of grammar errors to mention.
But yeah, the characters are its strong point a lot of times. They do ooze in personality.
So yeah, really good stuff out here.
Otto GruenwaldRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Endwalkers is a story in which characters from doomed worlds band together to stop the apocalypse not only in their own worlds but in all worlds. There's a little something here for everyone. If you want post-apocalpytic ficiton, there's a tough-as-nails female survior from world devasted by berserk weather. if you want fantasy fiction, you have a catman half-jinn whose lines are bolded to get you an idea of how deep he sounds when he speaks.
The characters are gathered together through a gaming device which translates the langauges of the characters so they can understand each other and takes them from world to world. If you like stories with RPG "systems," you'll like what Endwalkers has going on. I bet you could do some really interesting things with the console. It displays things about the characters--perhaps even things they themselves aren't aware of.
There were a few grammer mistakes that broke the flow of the story, but they were ultimately few and far between. The story is very fast paced, and its a ittle ot its detriment. The various worlds and the apocalyptic situations they face could use a little more fleshing out, becaue they're interesting, and I'd like to know more about them.
Overall, if you like eclectric genre blends, you'll find something to like in Endwalkers.
InfinityphoenixRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I mean, a story about apocalypses isn't going to be love and fluff, but at least it's not like a lot of apocalypse novels where the world just keeps on getting worse with no progress besides the mc getting stronger.
Style: Author has a style, it's clean and easy enough to understand. Simple enough that it fits the world (or worlds) described, but not too simple. I got that the bolded sentences are because they're the translated text of what the other people are saying, when you don't speak the language. Maybe the author could leave double spacing between paragraphs. Their chapters are short enough to afford it, in my opinion.
Story: It's great, a unique concept, and there's a potential end to the apocalypse in sight. Much better than most apocalypse novels do. And I am so glad the author decided to skip the whole 'you teleported me into a dying world when I need to save my own world' by just stating that all apocalypses need to be defeated to complete the game. Makes collaboration a bunch easier. I put story as 4.5 stars only because sometimes the plot seems like it's set up for a bit of drama in a way that's slightly too blatant. But that could just be my opinion.
Grammar: It's perfect! What can I say? At least when I read it, any mistakes have probably been corrected, but I haven't seen anything wrong for the first 20k words. Maybe the word choices don't fit the ages of the main characters on several occasions.
Character: Only part I could say I have any issue about. One reason is that I don't feel like I've gotten a good description of the characters yet. I could just be forgetting it. A second is the personalities of the characters from earth don't really reflect that they're from earth. Only 5 years passed since the apocalypse, after all, yet they say they've forgotten a lot. Could just be because as teenagers, they would've been young, but idk. The characters sometimes feel just a little too simple in some ways, but that could stem from the ease they begin col
Milo KiernanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The style is extremely straight forward and understandable, aside from some less important elements of the story (to the plot). It isn't hard to fill in any gaps, simple things like Verity shooting a beaver without quite saying she shot it, but the story would rather get to the meat of the matter anyway.
Speaking of...
The story wastes no time getting started, and the author must have a lead foot because the pedal never leaves the floor. The beginning can feel a bit rushed, but the pace evens out, feeling more natural and preserving the story's momentum as it goes on. I think the only real compaints I have are all related to the pace, more minor symptoms of speed, but that's also part of the story's charm.
The characters are all clearly laid out and distinct, though their dialogue prioritizes keeping the story's pace over characterization. They all have a very distinct tone and attitude which lends a surprising levity to the story, despite Verity barely holding it together, and the danger they all face.
There are no real issues with grammar, and not much to comment on.
EndWalkers knows what it is, a sports car on the Autobahn, and it isn't getting off any time soon.
LyptixRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Style: The writing style is fluid and descriptive, effectively setting the post-apocalyptic atmosphere. The author does a commendable job of capturing the protagonist's emotions and internal struggles. However, there are instances where the narrative becomes slightly disjointed and could benefit from smoother transitions between scenes.
Story: The introduction of the Game and the mission to "Break the Apocalypses" adds an unexpected twist, heightening the stakes and generating interest. However, the sudden introduction of the Game feels somewhat abrupt and I feel like it could've been better integrated into the narrative. Additionally, some aspects of the world-building, such as the nature of the protagonist's sickness and the significance of Safe Town, could benefit from further development to enhance clarity and depth.
Grammar: The grammar is good, with only a few minor errors or awkward phrasings. There were also some sentence structures that could be improved for clarity and conciseness but it didn't stop me from reading.
Characters: To say the least good. The protagonist seems to be resourceful, and each character has their own unique personality. The only thing that could've been better was if the author gave more info about their background (unless he was saving it for later) which would've given me a better idea in my head of their characteristics and motivation.
The Reality Next DoorRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I have been reading this book about the end of the world, multiple ends of the world actually.
First the style, I am starting to enjoy the paragraph breaks, but there are bold words all over the place. And I can't seem to figure out why, the system messages, and the classes, I get it. But sometimes, words are just, bold. While not bad per se, it is, strange and jars me out of the story.
The grammar is good, there are some flaws here and there, little errors but nothing too big or troublesome. The party grows rapidly, and I get flung very fast into the story before I even get to care about the first character.
While the characters are fun, it just seems like a ragtag bunch of people that need to save the world, after having read what is published so far, there has not been much theory on how it is possible there are multiple worlds, I expect this to be handled later.
I would have liked it, if the characters had been fleshed out a bit more in the beginning, there was this one guy that got his throat ripped out, I expect to see something about that later.
The story is all over the place in the beginning, who are these new enigmatic characters? Where did this console come from? Why is there a laptop when all other devices have been destroyed? Why have they been destroyed? How could the world have ended so easily? I expect that all these puzzle pieces will fit together into a grand picture later in the book. The stats have not been explained yet, I had expected this to happen with the first stat-check chapter.
All in all, a fun book to read, but it needs more time to develop, as is the case with most stories.