Enchanting

Self-Published

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Description

The walls between worlds have been slowly falling for some time as creatures of inconceivable power war across dimensions, fighting for the resources that power them.

For inhabitants of these worlds the war has passed mostly unnoticed so far, but times change…Ewynne is a young woman with a strange heritage, fighting her way out of impoverished beginnings and trying to find a new place in a less than kind world.

A LitRPG story.

Cover art by Jannie.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Timeam

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
88
Views
17,083

Chapters(40 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • LittleAnnaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story has really caught my interest, and I keep longing for new chapters to be published, especially as most chapters seems to end with some kind of cliff hanger.
    I really like the way that the pace changes throughout the story, and that each chapter carries the plot forwards, in a, to us as readers, sometimes a quite unknown and surprising way. Many times I have been fooled by pre-assumptions that turned out to be all the part of the author’s scheme.
    To begin with I wasn’t so sure what to think about the MC, Ewynne, and her ways of making choice, but as the story unfolds and we’re slowly given more pieces of this puzzle I’m quite starting to like and admire her.
    The language is beautiful and descriptive, and has a wonderful rhythm. (and yes, I’m learning some new words as I go along)
    Hang in there, I will surely follow this story til’ the end!
  • E. LinusRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I really like the way you write and the story is intriguing! I can't wait for the next chapter, especially a one with Eric... he is... an interesting one. ^^
    I get suprised by the story and the choices the charaters are making and I really love it!
    Thank you!
    Spoiler: Spoiler
  • Alter-EgoRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This is one of the amazing books here in rrl. Good job to the author, it was abit confusing at first with the Scribe and whatnot, but it steadily paced to a good read.
    The story is confusing tho, with the MC getting thrown into a bunch of different situations with a bunch of lucky circumstances.
    This novel is still in it's early states so I'll tune in. Loved the characters, but it would be nice to fleshen MC and the Guard guy some more.
    The story is confusing sometimes, but still amazkng and the grammar is basically as clean as soap.
    The style is awesome and the game like system is amazing too. I wonder what's the difference with the archive and the order  but that will come in due time.
    Keep writing, author! Don't abandon us!
    My advice to you is to smoothen out the confusion. Also, DON'T LEAVE SEAS OF TEXT, OKAY! IT GETS BORING AND CHUNKY.
  • MilandaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    One of the best parts of this story is how the MC questions so many things people take for granted in a litrpg. Why does this work? What's behind the system? What does that even mean?
    The story is absolutely fascinating but much like a good Mystery, the most intriguing part is what will she uncover next and what is going on in this world.
  • seratofRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This story is very well written and I loved the first few chapters, mainly because the main character is intelligent and driven.The reason I've grown to loathe this novel is every decision or action the MC takes ,even though they seem to be good intelligent choices or reasonable reactions, leaves her worse off or sometimes things seem better but subtly the novel makes you feel that she actually lost out on something even better. So because of that every chapter I've read recently has left me a little bit depressed and I don't enjoy that. I will check back maybe to see if things improve which I sincerely hope for.
  • NasorrenRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Although the story is pretty generic, it's the writing that makes it brilliant.
    The MC has to fo through aversaries and gets a class other than what she was hoping for and still works around it
    Great start, I hope this novel gets more known and that you don't drop it midway
  • SomeBSDeityRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Love the world and I'd like to love the mc but with all of the bs she takes and not showing any character development either personality or stat wise, I am kinda lost. The story throws out plot points like candy but then ignores them shortly after. It would make some sense that the mc is confused and lost but she isn't and she just seems to go along with stuff. I cannot in good conscience reccomrec this story to anyone right now, but I will continue to keep reading it for now and will change this review if the story stops being so confused with what it wants to do.
    Edit:
    After my previous review, the story has improved quite a bit and I can in good conscience recommend it as a quality story. I feel that past chapters may need some going over but recent chapters have won me back. Huzzah for story and character development.
  • darksevenRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I do really enjoy this story. The MC is smart and usually uses it to her advantage.
    My only real frustration is so many things keep happening to the MC that its starting to feel a little too chaotic. At first I hoped the author had a plan and would wrap things up, but instead more and more strange things keep happening and its starting to feel more like a jumble of events rather than an orchestrated story.
  • IxtaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The first chapter of this story feels very similar to many others I've read, but I find myself becoming more interested in the story with each new chapter.  It's openly labelled as a power fantasy, so there's no real surprise that the MC has special powers unlike any the world has seen before, and a plan to leverage them into even more wealth and power using his Earth-knowledge.  If the author can deliver that in an interesting way, I think this has the potential to be a great story.  It's still early in the story though, and so far the focus has been on establishing the character and building up a basic understanding of the world.  The author takes a somewhat casual tone early on, and the MC seems rather detached and laid back about being reincarnated.  That distant feeling decreases a bit when he discoveres magic, and he starts coming across as much more interested and engaged in life.  Personally, I hope to see more of that, since I think the character feels more real and interesting the more he emotionally reacts to and connects with the world around him.
  • Serpentine13Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    This story initially had me hooked, but some of the decisions of the main character feel either stupid or forced. For example, taking a trait that honestly seems rather mediocre to me over one gives an outright immunity. Anyway, aside from several events like this I enjoyed it well enough. My brain just won't let me let go of what seems like extremely flawed character reasoning.