Enatic Clans

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EnaticClans©byOstracizedPeak

And from the rib that the Father entity above had taken from the man, the Father entity above made a woman and brought her to the man. And the man said: “This is now bone of my bones and flesh of my flesh; she shall be called ‘woman,’ for out of man she was taken.”

- The Beginnings 2:22-23 (in 'Croisian' Scriptures)

Anda is the fourth incumbent of Kehina, facing a serious dilemma outside of her jurisdiction. A joint jihad-crusade! From a depraved 'Croisian' Pope of Acrania, a pushover 'Aslab' Caliph-Emperor of Inglovia, and a conniving nomadic 'Amakiir Clan', the vassal of Inglovia, conspire to oust the infidels of Kehina. Kehinan women are exotic type of being surpassing normal men’s standards dubbing as "Alpha Women", to Anda's dismay, she is given a choice whether: desire to extend her polyandrous slaves or bribe political alliances inside Inglovia's reach?

"Have you ever heard where women dominate men and govern a domain?"

"Look over there! Beyond the seas, you can find them hiding..."

DISCLAIMER:

This narrative is heavily derived on these games and genres:Crusader Kings series,and this, Dungeons & Dragons, and JRPG-theme games, Inputting some deviations and discretions upon the progression of the plot.

The story revolves around the consorts of Anda (the matriarch of the House of Carylle and the queen of the Kingdom of Kehina; stylized as either "Lady" or "Queen") as the main protagonists and will be all in First POV's.

Women in Kehina are set tohave immense (Amazonian) powersin their blood which men confer on their rib as a tribute for permissive intercourse. Average men tend to have 24 ribs as 1 rib is to offer for procreation, reducing below 23 ribs ensue for a total death as it only applies to Kehinan men.

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Averageof at least 1,000 words/chapter (possibly biweekly)

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Ostracized Peak

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Rating: 4.7/ 5.0
Followers: 87
Views: 69,367

Chapters(159 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

spotcheckered7Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Your band seems so enjoying I'll definitely want to watch you perform with the inclusion of the pieces that you posted. Good Job! Well, back to the fiction what you are writing. Certain aspects of the tone of the characters seem legit and authentic.
The only downside to it is your words per chapter however, to defeat the purpose of it. You seem to update it daily. And the character that fascinates me the most is the one who is quoting:
("Have you ever heard where women dominate men and govern a domain?"
"Look over there! Beyond the seas, you can find them hiding...").
This is the very first time that I have read an online fiction that contains first person POV, multiple leads, and in present tense form. Such a daring act to put things up. Because first things first, a female with a harem seems an act of mysogonistic towards women however, the story implies that female with more than one husband is very prestigious in the cultural setting.
The tone of the story is very original and a NOVELTY, to put it in a simple terms. I am not particularly inclined in terms of alphabet besides from A to Z. The weird looking letters haunts through my mind. Luckily, the author is very considerate inserting the pronunciation of each words that comprises of funny letters.
Overall: The story so far may qualify for the writathon challenge. As maybe, the author (You), desire to achieve such feats.
Anathema AnthropomorphosisRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
At first, the title is a natural eye-catcher. There are some chapters that make the moment, most of them are in boring part (disclosing: it is a political simulation), but the fight scenes are usually lit and well-written. Despite that, several protagonists are well-grayed portrayed characters. In the end, Enatic Clans is a feminine religious political struggle against the external powers.
johnshockludenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Enatic Clans is such a weird name to begin with. The name itself of the novel seems strange. And at first, it must be some kind of flowery titles. Before I assess this critic, this story has a promising plot and arcs around it. Since, I only search from the update now. Such as a shame that this title does have not seems to acquire a cover picture. But wait,!: Oh, that's so awesome!' and then I got really into it. The story is so good, the characters are so great, and the writing is really good. It's not just a great book, it's also a really great story. I'm really glad I started this book. It is a slow burner but it seems all set into first person point of view. All characters seem to have an opinion to one another. Also, help differs who is who and which is which whom they like or dislike. This is a must read for anyone who likes fantasy, fantasy romance, adventure (Ameniah's, Gervþas, and Geoff) or anything in-between. If you haven't started it yet, you should. And, of course, if you're looking for a book that you can read in one sitting, this one is perfect. (Five chapters to say the least). You won't regret it!
I highly recommend it to anyone. (I've read it twice.)
similesimilaritiesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
"We need to 'sleep' in order to dream. The 'food' to conquer our dreams. And the 'sex' for them - the proceeding generations to continue what we left behind during our days in this world."
Such powerful words. Definitely, must a read for an unadvertised ficition. He/she is a pretty skilled English writer. All words resonate me when I am reading this work. It may not be 'Magnus Opus' but I think he/she is trying to connect to his/her viewers.
1Reposed8Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
"To honor the rules or to cheat. It is a big question whether what is at stake. Abiding to the rules is a beckon of being respectful towards your adversary. Through the essence of either sportsmanship or gentlemanship. The stipulation is the bearing of the entailment of having a rival in a friendly way or an acknowledgement by the foe. However, if you defy all of the bounds to the barred circles. There are many repercussions lurking around you."
"When you cheat, it is either you both win or score a win and a loss. But this case is not so similar when you follow the rules. It is either settling a draw and a win or getting two wins."
"Cheating is a procurement of an unworthy victory. Winning is everything but that everything may cause you a travesty. Winning is a process of proving one's own self against its opponent. But getting caught while playing the same game and breaking the rules is a different story. In the field of sports, competitiveness is the crucial factor of an athlete. When a competitor loses the game is not lost at all. Someone did try their best and the fruit of those representations are: the gallantry and the lessons. On the other hand, the individual both wins at the same time. The honor and the recognition from its foe and the game itself."
Enatic Clans is a medieval political fantasy simulation story. The set of the characters is relying to the five consorts of Lady Anda or the queen of Kehina. They are the: State and Foreign Affairs, Army, Business, Secret Service, and Religious Affairs. The set of policy is quite intricate.
Cay RyanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
And so here is another amazing story on RR that you should really be looking at right now rather than reading this review. I love this story, it’s characters and its rather lovely prose which all bundles together into a package that’s just plain fun to read! Just… Again, read this! But here are the categories.
Style:
The prose in this story flows wonderfully, with its also being just nice to read. I’d say this is one of the stories on RR that really have prose on the level of a published novel rather than of a web novel.
Grammar:
Small errors but,... No problems here! So, there isn’t really anything to comment on.
Story:
Now the story of this series is like a regular web novel series of a serialised TV series, but I can see this getting bigger in scope later on down the line like B5. Though each chapter, despite being good to read as little bite sized pieces also flow between each other excellently as part of the larger story. Again, everything in this category is nicely done.
Character:
Everyone in this series is distinct in both their voice and personality, with them being established quickly and smoothly. They are interesting to follow with their own dreams, aspirations and pasts ready to be explored. Several of them have also had lines that have made me happily grinning like an idiot and I have to give points for that.
DieIsTheCastRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
ENATIC CLANS is a nation-building style with a multiple leads which are the five husbands of the queen. Lady Anda of the Carylle Dynasty of Family. She rules the island nation of Kehina. The set of government is based on the hierarchy of women and maintaining the lead of power which is the women. The inner circle or the council is made of her five husbands. Guan is my favorite character - simple and hardworking!
HoulingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
He can write, well, in a decent standard that needs improving. He can sing, rap, and scream so well. I don't know if he is one of the artist in the underground and got bored or demoted out of the existence (joke!). He can play - play Chess! As a chess player myself, I did enjoy the episodes where it feature the Chess game. #ChessAtItsFinest #GiuocoStivale:KnightAttack,LolliAttack,Oni-chanDefense!
Enatic Clans is a nation buliding series that focuses in the aspects of Diplomacy, Martial, Statesmanship, Intrigue, and Religion. And thus, of the 5 protagonists that were assigned to and they are Geoff who is an envoy/emissary, Aisla the war general, Guan the peasant who has the skills of a regular businessman, The fallen prince holds the minister of agency as a spymaster, and Gervþas the court chaplain.
Style: it resonates to those who play Ck2 and Ck3 first pov fits so well, well idk about the present tense part, 5/5
Story: a decent influx of the story there are some backtracking of the present situations but what I am being confused is the insertion of the reminiescient of the encounter of their "Lady Anda". Btw, 5/5. Start off hot, gradually coming off hot too.
Grammar: 5/5
Character: as a pragmatic viewer, not being overly fastidious and meticulous. I think the characters ride so well to the story presented. Different guys assigned to the specific responsibility. No OP over the other. They have their own hobbies, interests, missions, coping to the situations, etc. And the characters feels so vibrant and realistic. GOOD JOB! 5/5
Overall: I dont mind giving a 5/5 as long as the author deserves the review.
LacQeurusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Too much fat, needs some trimming down. The chapters blend together pretty quickly and the other povs are more confusing than anything. I get that they are supposed to tease events to come but personally I think they should be held off until they are closer to becoming relevant. Short snippets of some random future character are useless in the early parts of the story.
Runan12LastRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Author: This person can write (Well, obviously, duh?) can sing, can rap, and can SCREAM. His writing and work ethic is astonishing considering on how can he pulls up such feats. Constantly publishing his work here in RR on a daily basis and writing a song, giving him a some credit deeming that his chosen genre is difficult to compose with. Metal, well hell Yeah! This dude (I might assume since its gender is designated as undisclosed) is a full package. This author is a metalhead so as I am a metalhead. Kudos! And the song slaps. Good Job, by the way. I hope you can be successful to your writing and song-writing at the same time.
Work: Enatic Clans is nation buildling simulation where all people (Kehinan) are bound to their subservient to their queen. The society is made of a community that respects women and their rights. Kehina is a matriarchal society by which all of the citizen (especially male) requires to offer their rib to perform sexual activity with their chosen partner, according to the synopsis.
Style: Multiple First Person of View is kinda of a tedious set up. So far, the story is kind of sticks to what the author is trying to do. I will give a considerate 4.5/5 score.
Story: The narration is quite unique and exotic. Considering that we get hanged of our current society where men rule and women only serve in the household. 5/5.
Grammar: By far, the word choice is impeccable. Got a some vocabulary in his arsenal. 5/5. Not an English native, by the way.
Character: They are all quite realistic. Considering thr author is also a fan of Paradox Games. He is having fun of making his characters seem mature and have a definite solid remarks on them. 5/5. Ameniah is an asshole. Guan is an idiot. A solid line up for a gang of "The Five Horsemen".