Elysium

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Description

The first God, Prometheus.A being that transcended simple Godhood. He stood at the apex of power, the pinnacle of creation. But it was his might that became his downfall.His heart corrupted as his lovers and friends withered away with the passing of time. He envied them; their mortality and he thristed for it, more and more with each second.His mind and soul were thrown in an endless maelstrom of envy over his own brethren and raw madness. But before he gave into the pull of insanity he ended his own life.Overloading his own power in an explosion so massive that the fundamentals of space and time were distorted, a lone soul made its way through the cracked dimensions; bypassing nether and purgatory. Astray and confused the small wisp entered its new life.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: TDM_Myst

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Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Views: 273

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Community Reviews(10)

AnarchyDevRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Nothing much to say when other users have taken their time to make their own detailed reviews above.....
A well thought out and well written story, Just read it yourselves and decide.
Not your ordinary run-of-the mill Reincarnation story!!!
Doid_HaiveRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overall I really like the story. It is your typical reincarnation setting, but without the instant op-ness. The MC seems to be gradually getting stronger and some mysteries are needed to be uncovered. For example Hyat, what was he? What does he guard? etc.
The style is quite to my liking, the author changes between third and first person quite often. It did not escape me that he does this while describing a fighting scene, third person; and when it is about the MC he changes to first person. I like it as that way we can keep an general overview of a fight whilst in third person and know what exactly is happening inside his mind in first person.
I can't say anything about the story yet, but it seems to diverge from: slow paced power accumulation and peaceful living towards a climax in form of a tragedy and the MC needing to change his plans for the future.
The grammar is neat. Some few mistakes but mostly superficial, these can simply be overread and don't disturb the reader in his... uh... reading?!
I like the MC, he is realistic for now. Honest with himself and emotional. In the first chapters he didn't simply brush his own death off, he suffered from it and even in the present chapters he still does. I like it.
All I had to say has been said. I like the fiction and hope the author keeps it up! :D
TheThursdayBoyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I found the setting very interesting. The characters were quite unusual, but cool.
The art helped a lot to visualize the story, but even without it, it was descriptive enough for me to imagine.
It's an interesting and dark world, I wonder what other creatures or gods roam the same place, and what other dangers there are.
I found Alyssa adorable, and I don't think this is a place for her to be. Lethes didn't interest me that much, but I hope that in the future he will give the character more depth. My favorite character so far is Charon, I would like to know more about his past and if he is really powerful.
Oh, and the songs were also very good, something I would easily add to my playlist.
EvinieRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is a masterpiece! Can't wait for more chapters!!
UnDeadPuffRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
While not necessarily novel, the story is well written and presented, and the characters are people I find myself having actual reactions to instead of just bland cutouts. The introductory period was a tad too long, and I felt the romance hasn't earned its place yet. Curious to see what comes next.
bombsquadrentRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I usually find sci-fi and the sort to be quite a turn off for me but I love this fiction. I also usually exclusively read litrpg but despite the element not appearing until later chapters I could not stop myself from binge reading.
Like with many fics with the romance tag this one doesn't quite have something solid but there is several developments happening and some romance has started, which doesn't seem shallow at the moment.
Despite the lack of a main character solid romance among other things such as a small doll-like music-liking character who stimulates my anxiety, I really loved reading this. I remember during my read over the past day that there were several times I looked at the authors note and noticed they were celebrating the first follow or first favorite, which surprised me since I was liking the story so much. I really love what you're putting out, author and look forward to future chapters.
FanFicFanaticRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The title says it all. The description of the main character is very well done. The reader is able to relate to him quite easily (at least I was). The emotions felt by the protagonist from his death to his rebirth are all detailed and refreshing. I'm a huge fan of the OP baby genius power trips that inhabit RR, but this one really is different. It's almost refreshing how well connected the protagonist's emotions are to a real baby. If I didn't know any better, this could actually explain a lot of the weird things babies do. It's noticeable how much thought the author put into the character buildup to the latest chapter. Minor issues like grammar, spelling errors, though they aren't very big. Bravo sir/madam, you are in the process of polishing a raw diamond, and if you continue, based on how well you've written the first few chapters, I'm sure we'll see another beautiful gem on RR.
ILoveAnimeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I really like writing style in this FF story is pretty solid and it really sucks you in. You can't stop reading it and you can relate and feel intentions from text. I have read till chp. 17 and until then its great growing up and tragedy story! Seems pretty epic setup for story.
Space Time KingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The story has potential, keep it up, also good job coming up with a new idea and not just a remake of an old one :)
KarnageRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The Grammar is decent, well punctuated and completely readable. Style is also the same, well spaced enough so you don't get that jumbled feel and separates the different points.
Reading this makes me worried and tense, as is all tragedy genre fics, but the good kind of worried and tense. I feel absolutely bad for this MC and it makes you want to throw a Overgod Artifact for him, just a normal guy placed in horrible situations and adapting slowly and becoming more powerful and gaining a few ruthless traits, however he still retains senses and compassion and has a generally balanced tolerance
Waiting to see how this will turn out in the future-