Elemental World Chaos

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

k3ks3

• Chapter 38
  Nov 9, 2015
• Chapter 37
  Nov 8, 2015
• Chapter 36
  Oct 17, 2015
• Interlude 3: The Demon Lord's Daughter
  Oct 15, 2015
• Chapter 35 (REWRITE)
  Oct 15, 2015
• Chapter 34
  Sep 26, 2015
• Chapter 33
  Sep 26, 2015
• Chapter 32
  Sep 26, 2015
• Chapter 31
  Sep 25, 2015
• Chapter 30
  Sep 25, 2015
• Chapter 29
  Sep 24, 2015
• Chapter 28
  Sep 23, 2015
• Chapter 27
  Sep 22, 2015
• Chapter 26
  Sep 22, 2015
• Chapter 25
  Sep 22, 2015
• Chapter 24
  Sep 22, 2015
• Chapter 23
  Sep 20, 2015
• Chapter 22
  Sep 20, 2015
• Chapter 21
  Sep 20, 2015
• Chapter 20
  Sep 20, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• Jodamaster17Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I have read this entire novel and I quite enjoy it. The story is very good at pulling you in and you genuinely care for the MC and you are looking forward to what is going to happen next. The only complaints I have is that the grammer is a bit subpar and that it needs a ragedy tag but I do not think either of those things take away from the story.
  All in all. I recommend anyone who can get over a bit of bad grammar in order to read a really good story to give it a shot
• sakurai~donoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Actually, i'am quite shocked that this story did not recieve 5 star or something close because it deserves it (it's interesting, at least).  Well, the POVs  are a bit confusing at the beginning chapters but it gets better as it goes( the author is improving his/her writing style). And the grammer is understandable ( i am not a guru in english so please, pardon me, i cannot judge others).
  People who like reincarnation stories are welcome to try this. It appease one's thirst from boredom, at least.That is all.
• avinashRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  nice story, going a litle too fast,  but overall good
• RubixxcubeRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I enjoy this story. I really do. I like the way you switch between points of view and I like the background that you give to the characters. You even incorporated a bit of romance.
  But, please, for the love of all that is good and holy, get yourself a real proofreader.
  The word you're looking for is quite. The word quiet is something entirely different.
  You also really need to make some sort of demarcation for whenever you switch points of view. It doesn't even need to be blatant, just press enter a couple more times in between the paragraphs.
  Please don't be discouraged from writing. There are a lot of clichés, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I can tell that you're incorporating a bit of the Chinese Xianxia novel manner of communication between students, and while I personally find it a bit strange given the context, it doesn't mean you shouldn't do it. It's your story and you're being original and it's great. I would also be lying if I said I didn't love how fast that you upload your chapters, but I would put some serious thought into keeping the font size normal. As it is now, it seems as if you're trying to fill up a page with less material in the same way that a high school student writing an essay for their English class would. The biggest problem with it, though, is that it's simply painful to read text that bold and big. Think about it.
  Thanks for writing.
• GreadeRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  In my opinion, this entire story is below average. It doesn't have any redeeming points that would allow me to say that this story even had potential.
  Style:
  Random switches between POV of the MC and the 'Narrator'? Actually nevermind. The MC was the narrator now that I think about it. You even had the MC talk to the reader instead of using a proper narration or an appropriate method to convey certain information to us.
  Your chapters consisted of blocks of text that started and ended in random and inconvenient spots. Your use of 1st person POV was pretty bad, making the "I's" annoyingly obvious. There was a random time skip of 3 years at one point with no forewarning.
  Story :
  I...I should first mention at the content of your so-called 'Arc 1'. If I were to list out the events that happened during Arc 1, then it would probably sound like an interesting read. Sadly, you managed to add in so much irrelevant stuff that only 5-10% of the text actually means something.
  Your world building was pretty weak as well. Actually it was atrocious now that I recall it. You actually succeeded in confusing the sh*t out of me when it comes to power rankings. I have absolutely no idea how strong each character is. Hmmm... Let's just say I have no idea on anything concerning the world except that there are Humans, Beast kin, and Demons?
  Grammar:
  It would have been okay if you knew how to properly write  in 1st person consistently. There were also some really obvious spelling mistakes like whine instead of wine.
  Character:
  Everyone's shallow. MC's decisions have no basis and he seems to contradict himself sometimes. For example, at one point the MC mentions how he had no feelings towards Mia. He also seems to be a logical thinker and has no hesitation when it comes to killing. But then he randomly saves Mia, promising to protect her. Why? Don't really know. Author please don't create random scenes that contradict the characters just to fulfill the plot.
  Conclusion:
  Overall, it was below
• grinderotaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  it had a good start and I was looking forward to chapter 2 but I can't read the font...I dont know what shade you using but it looks like a blur to me....and i don't want to highlight every chapter just to read it