Eidolon Rebirth

Self-Published

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Description

Magic exists everywhere, except for the unlucky few. The myth known as no-mages, sentenced to a fate worse than slaves. Not even privy to memories of past lives.

The pattern of history is meant to break, yet corruption forces a displaced sense of normality.

Countless memories torment my consciousness as I vow that everything will be different.

Schedule: Mon-Thur, Sat. - Will be posted before 10PM KST on those days.

Cover Art bychiirex

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: DarkVolatis

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 84
Views: 74,197

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Community Reviews(3)

TheHexRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I honestly like the story. Chapters might be a little short, and the pacing a little rushed sometimes, but reading through it was still a very enjoyable experience.
Eidolon Rebirth has a light novel vibe to it, being easy to read and to digest— something great for a non native english speaker, such as myself. Though, those who prefer more traditional and flowery fantasy might not like it for it's simplicity.
Characters make use of some very well-known anime tropes, which in turn make certain elements rather predictable— though not in a bad way. The general plot and characters remind me slightly of light novels such as 'Arifureta', for instance. If you like such novels, you will certainly like this one.
I'm amused by the story and definitely want to know how things will progress in the future. A guaranteed follow and favorite for me. If you like stories that are easy to read and anime tropes, then go ahead. You will enjoy reading Eidolon Rebirth.
Ethernet StoryhunterRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
If the author had taken a bit more time in the beginning to introduce the main character the introduction would have hit harder and hooked better.
A naive young warrior betrayed attempts to make his way in a hostile world.
This main character lacks depth on intruction and in the following early chapters.
The world building is good. Character interactions are ok. The early female companion has a fair about of character but it makes the main more flat.
The style is light novel with a somewhat naive but ruthless protagonist.
Honestly the entire early section needs a rework or it will never be more then light novel lvl.
If that's what you want more power to you.
EamondRoyal Road
★ 0.5
normally this would be a .5 star drive by rating, but since the website automatically prompts you to review now, here goes. the story is extremely fast paced. this is not good. its the literary equivalent of being thrown in the passenger seat of a formula 1 race car moments after you've received a consussion and then being asked to read and remember a message held on those giant placards by fans. the odds of you noticing/knowing aanything going on are extremely slim.
dear author, please describe your characters, events, settings and world. the chapters i've currently read resemble a decent story that somebody took an undustrial sander to, like... there's a structure and base there, but the meaningful parts and possibly interesting content is just.....blank