Dysphoria - A Dark Fantasy

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Description

In the world of Terrace, all is right. Man and monster, together in harmony, after what seemed like an eternity of senseless war.

Our story begins in Shukaku, one of many villages residing in the Eastern Kingdom of Hitori. Once graced with bountiful harvest but now an uncolorful collection of shacks and barns with dreary residents to match it. As misfortune follows the village and its inhabitants were claimed by flame and wiped from the map in a single night without any traces of survivors. During the incident farmers in neighboring villages reported a haunting scream that cascaded across the land piercing the silence of its sleep. Not of terror or sadness but of pure torment. Nine years have passed since that night and after a string of murders leading all the way to Rosetta, the capital of the Southern Empire of Solis, opportunity knocks on the door of Morgan Blu. A once decorated war hero turned lowly bounty hunter. Little does he know answering that door will lead him down a path of pure dysphoria as the world around him descends into chaos.

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Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • BruhgundyRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Overall, not bad grammar. The story is... "interesting" and they only 'problem/question' I have is about the bold italic.
    entences, not that its bad, though, even though I got used to it pretty fast, why? Is there a purpose, or is it due to aesthetic reasons?
    That's it really, I'm pretty trash when it comes to reviews I'm afraid.
  • luda305Royal Road
    1.0
    This is without a doubt one of the more baffling stories on Royal Road.  Despite indicia that this might be a high quality work, it is anything but.
    Formatting: Why is everything bold and italicized? No indicator when there is a timeskip.
    Grammar is really bad.  Lots of run on sentences.  Many instances of unusual sentence structure which throw off reading.  Paragraphs are far too long for fiction. Inconsistent spellings; misspellings. Violates norms of how dialogue is depicted in the written word.
    Plot is a mess. Prologue is a mess. I'm not sure what is happening there.  The characterization of Black seem odd.  The metatext suggests they are a consistent, rational character, while their actions say otherwise. How did Black have the power to kill everyone? Blu--the protagonist--seems to be trying really hard in fail in chapter 1.  I think he lacks social skills. The deductions made in the village don't make sense. Then the author in the AN's provides additional information which is not in the text, but appears to be required to understand it?? Blu then ends up sent on a random side quest, but coincidentally the target from his main quest is there too? Deus ex machina.
    And what's a steel mine?
    [Edited to remove discussion re: artwork]