Dungeon Island

Self-Published

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Description

Reincarnated into a dungeon core beneath an island after losing my memories. I don’t yet know what happened to me, why I am here and the likes. But one day I will find out and then I will settle on my next actions. For now, I just have to take care of my little crabs.

Warning:the'Grimdark','Gore'and'Traumatising content'are not there for show. They may not be fully relevant in the first chapters, but they are definitely there for a reason.

Schedule: when I feel like it (usually between Wednesday and Friday night).

This story is not a really serious work, I will use it to train my writing skills before going back to my other stories (Jezoi, andVlaryne) that are currently on hold.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
941
Views
489,634

Chapters(47 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Adam AdamRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Vive la France et vive le donjon!
    J'aime la qualité d'écriture et de l'histoire. Les personnages sont intéressants mais pas extraordinaires il semble normal avec un vécu des rêves et des peurs. Le donjon comprend assez bien les humains pour ne pas être dominé par leur émotion et assez pour comprendre leur train de penser que je me suis fait prendre conscience que pour la première fois je l'ai raconté une histoire ou un donjon vraiment compris entre un donjon utilisé leur faiblesse et leur amour pour la force, les richesses et tous les potentielle moyen de domination mentale pour les guider comme il le veut dans c'est tunel maudit
    Désolé c'etais plus fort que moi ...
  • KamiKira00Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It is one of the best dungeon stories here. Most of them are same. But this feels differect. We can see how how dungeon develops, how he finds out about himself.
    I red a lot of novels here. And barely 10 stories are in my top that are interesting and unique. This is one of them.
  • LogosthusRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I find myself enjoying this story more and more as the chapters go on. Even though English isn't the authors first language, he makes a really good show of describing the world and characters in more depth than alot of english authors I do read from. I love the way your world is constructed and your takes on the way a dungeon builds itself and its creatures up from scratch.
    I look foward to your continued writing and can't wait for the next installment.
  • BoredBeyondBeliefRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Reminds me of a novel where theirs cities of monsters in a labrinth.
    This is pretty similar but it intrests me a lot so I hope the author continues working on it
  • codelordRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Fun and interesting as of chapter 14 looking forward to more
  • TheGreenKrakenRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The author seemes to have made a mission how spin the divine dungeon series into a grittier fantasy (cultivation?) series with Crab Rave being a major point for the story. Honestly its good. The story has drama and humor. And mean humans that hurt the precious cat girls. So I give it some stars, hopefully the author revisits it.
  • lonevoldRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    It's a good story, but my really only problem with this one is the writing style.
  • KevlarkelloRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    So far only 35 chapters, I am enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to more and how the island and dungeon evolve as your story progresses. Keep up the good work and thanks for the read. One last thing I see 3 stars as average and 4 stars as above average,  I could see this story becoming 5 stars for me with time.
  • SolyomRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story itself has quite a lot of potential. It is another way of showing the "reincarnated into a dungeon" story. What makes it fresh is the relatively isolated location of the dungeon. In the latest chapters, there is less of develooment in the dungeon and more of a "side character POW storyteling". I'd personally prefer the opposite, but it's just a personal issue.
    What is NOT a personal issue is the grammar. What especially bugs my mind is the totally incosistent use of the tenses. Even in one paragraph, you can see it starting at present tense, switching into past and back into present. And I'm not talking about mixing in coversations.
    Overall, it is a pretty good read, if the grammar gets better, then it has the potential to became a truly great story.
  • KiokuRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Much slower to start than most stories of this type, and less-slow (but still slow) later on... but once it gets past the startup period, it's pretty good and worth pushing through the first dozen chapters to get to the rest.