DUNGEON GOD

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2022

Author

Sparx gaming

• THE PRACTICE OF QI
  Jun 12, 2022
• MANY SOURCES OF POWER
  Jun 12, 2022
• THE SERVANT FROM HELL
  Jun 12, 2022
• THE ANCIENT TALE
  Jun 10, 2022
• THE LITTLE GIRL
  Jun 10, 2022
• DUNGEON CONQUEROR
  Jun 9, 2022
• THE LUCKY DAY
  Jun 9, 2022
• JOURNEY TO THE MYSTIC FOREST
  Jun 8, 2022
• THE THORN OF THE ROSE
  Jun 6, 2022
• INTRODUCTIONS
  Jun 6, 2022
• CEREMONY DAY
  Jun 6, 2022
• THE SWEET MORNING
  Jun 5, 2022

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• InfantryTerminatorRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Sorry for being harsh, but this isn't a story. This is bunch of rushed, short drafts filled with random ideas. Most of the time its impossible to understand what is going on because of poor formating, rushed pacing, lack of descriptions, and semi-decent grammar.
  While I would normally would leave some tips for clearly new authors, I cannot find anything that can be salvaged as everything needs to be improved. Maybe reading other fictions would show author what he needs to work at.
• MaplanicRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  I usually don't leave reviews due to the fact that i have a hard time putting my thoughts into words which leads me to not actually review anything however i decided that it would be best to let people know what they would be getting into with this story.
  When reading the title i thought that the story would be about someone who gained skills that allowed them to become a god at clearing dungeons or perhaps they would have some kind of bad event happen that would lead to them becoming a Dungeon Core or Dungeon Master (the summary provided by the author doesn't really help with setting expectations) i'm still not sure if i was right.
  Grammar: The author in one of the author's notes points out that this is their first story so there could be some spelling and grammar mistakes and in another kindly asks for assistance with this. The issue is that while in some of the mistakes are easy enough to fix, other mistakes lead me to have issues understanding what the author is trying to say leading me to not even know where to begin assisting in correcting and this happens in every chapter to a rediculous degree
  Style: since this is their first novel i can understand not using blue boxes or anything complicated like that (might even be that the author just dislikes blue boxes) the problem is that they seem to have a habit of overexplaining which comes in the form of a hyperactive system that likes to identify everything from his parents to the house he lives in. Combine that with the fact that all the system information is in capital letters and it can be a bit of a difficult read, also for some strange reason they decided to put talking in square brackets '[]' instead of quotation marks " " which is a bit of a strange way to break from writing norms in their first novel. (it also doesn't help that the story feels like they threw a whole bunch of cliche's at a wall to see what would stick then scraped it onto a piece of paper and wrote out a story based on that unholy abominat