Dungeon Core: Alex : Hiatuss Infinitetum

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Description

Alex was an average guy. He lived in an average house, in an average neighborhood and worked at an average job. One day while walking home he was looking at a short skirt a little too closely and didn’t see a car.

In some kind of God like kidnapping his soul was taken from his rightful afterlife and forced into a dungeon core! A dungeon core under the control of a black robed necromancer bent on destroying the world.

Will Alex learn what it is to be a dungeon? Will He help to destroy the world? Or will he find a new path? A path of his own design.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Jalf_Whitemage

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 327
Views: 83,766

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

MyriddinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Its a similar start to Bound Dungeon, but then again The New World also has a similar start to Randidly Ghosthound, and I don't think anyone will argue THOSE stories are the same :P
In that same vein I feel like a direct comparison between The Bound Dungeon and this story is unwarrented and unfair, its completely different once you get beyond the setting.
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Now about the story itself, the Style flows well, the story seems good for now but really its hard to judge a story fairly until the novel has finished, so I can only say how I feel about it.
The characters so far are believable and I feel have a suitable amount of depth about them. Character interactions are well handled and keep the story going nicely.
Grammer is on the whole very good, but there are a few littel mistakes which can be a bit jarring, such as 'salves' instead of 'slaves' a few times. Using a correction software like Grammarly /should/ help with this a bit but in the end its just about having more focus while writing. Though again, its no biggie.
TekknosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
love 3 main things ( game like status and skills, necromancers, and dungeons) the more of all of them the better this is great.
alicar565Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I did not think about a story from the dungeon point of view but the more I look into it the more I found this style has been around for a while and there is other like it. I doenjoy your charaters and like where you are taking your story with. There has been a few grammer errors and some spots are a bit confusing to read but in all I enjoy how this story has started.
ajrswim2000Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
The problem is that the start of this story is almost identical to "Bound Dungeon" another story on this site that has been going on for a while. This is not a huge problem as long as the story makes a point to differenitate itself going forward. I will re-evaluate and possible add another star is there is enough in the future make this story unique.