Dress Timeless

Self-Published

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Description

[Hiatus/Unfinished]

(Short Story)

People change. Society change. Repeating patterns with slight differences happen.

In a perfect world, these changes don't need to exist. For these two lovers, that's not the case at all. Rather, they eventually become satisfied with the harsh changes and simply disappear.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Sen Sekai

Tags

FEMALE LEADTRAGEDYSUPERNATURALROMANCE SUBPLOTPSYCHOLOGICALMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSSHORT STORYLOW FANTASYREINCARNATIONTIME TRAVEL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.0/ 5.0
Views
216

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Cynical StrangerRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The start was good. I like the way you describe things, it paints a clear picture in the reader's mind. The characters seem interesting enough and I did want to know them better but then it just ended. The ending does not feel natural, it is abrupt and makes it feel like the story is not finished.
    Maybe it was the point? That promising new relationship can abruptly stop with no good explanation, like someone moving to a new city? I feel like I'm reaching.
    In short, it had a promising start but the ending ruined it for me.