Drakestone

Self-Published

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Description

Junipor Reign is a member of the Pharine race, a species of humanoids with fox-like qualities. She is determined, yet overly confident; bold when confronting danger, yet awkward when facing anything else. Junipor finds herself tasked with a seemingly impossible destiny, to journey to a distant land and marry the Dragon Prince. Escorted by a handsome dragon knight, Junipor must decide between her destiny and saving her homeland.

Cover art by Ivanna

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.2/ 5.0
Followers
26
Views
6,104

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • luda305Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Chapter 1 has some serious issues. There's a very long diary-like entry for an intro, which is a strange stylistic choice.  It's set in the real world, but one of the major faults is that a lot of buzzwords are thrown at it by the author and misused.  The remainder of the chapter is a bunch of info-dumps, and many of the pre-chapter notes are also info-dumps, rather than a careful addition to worldbuilding.
    Additionally, the introduction of our protagonist, and a significant portion of the story so far, is about sexualizing the protagonist. E.g., she complains about her chest size at least a half dozen times and how she can't attract any mates. So bear in mind it's that type of story if you're considering reading this.
    Through nine chapters, almost nothing in the synopsis has actually happened other than a thorough introduction to Junipor. Some of the pre-chapter notes make allusions to an isekai, but that's not a part of the proper story, and if that's the only place the isekai comes up, it shouldn't be a part of the synopsis.  In any event, it's a long way until Junipor crosses the threshold and begins her adventure.
    Finally, the story is rife with spelling errors, though the grammar is decent.  Odd mix.