Doomsday Pillars

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Description

The world end on January 2020, it was started with a plague that brought death upon 80% of the population. When the survivors thought there was no more hope.. They came. 1008 pillars dropped from the sky and spread all around the world in more than 100 countries. The pillars become defensive bases to the of the survivors left. But in the end.. after 10 years The human race still lost. This is a story of Alex, given a second chance to start anew, one month before it all started. This time it will be different for his family, friend, and the human race

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019
Author
Avan

Tags

ACTIONSCI-FIMARTIAL ARTSSLICE OF LIFEMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSPOST APOCALYPTICMYSTERYREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYCONTEMPORARY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.4/ 5.0
Followers
153
Views
124,108

Chapters(65 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Jrs360Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Good story. The story is interesting and well thought out. The preparation phase is complete, the characters set up, and I can't wait to see how it goes from here.  Yes the grammar could use some work, though it's much better than what I'd write in another language.
  • 13lack12oseRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The story is based in modern-day Indonesia (which is different and therefore awesome).
    Standard premise of MC being sent back to help humanity survive the oncoming catastrophe. But Avan (the author) has managed to build a complex set of characters inside a believable world (massive plus).
    Unfortunately, the grammar, as mentioned by most of the other reviews, is quite poor. Below the standards of most RR stories, which already suffer from luck lustre grammar IMO.
    Avan has addressed these concerns multiple times and with the more recent chapters there has been some slight improvements.
    Hopefully we will continue to see growth in this area and it is the only thing holding the story back from being truly excellent!
  • MichaelTheWizardRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The story is great, it has a great plot and interesting characters. The grammar is terrible however. It goes beyond just a few errors, with the author basically never conjugating any words. If you don’t mind bad grammar, give the story a go. But if grammar is important to you, then this story will be unreadable.
  • draconixRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story concept isn't too bad and the MC seems to be proactive.  It's still early days so we'll see how it develops.  The author does make an effort to develop secondary characters with fleshed out backgrounds.  There's a bit of a tendency to tell more than show and the grammar could use some work, but great job overall.
  • BebeestyrRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    It's obvious that English is your 2nd language, so take some time to really feel out what your writing.  Thought the author did a great job in the beginning of proof reading his work, but it steadily gets worse.
  • xXSB101XxRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    From chapter 20ish, the grammar takes a serious nosedive in quality. I recommend that you spend some time and go back through and fix the grammar. The other complant I have is the fact that you actually used Nazis and the Illuminati as actual factions, it's just so outrageously cliche that it takes a reader out of the immersion. Beyond that the story is fine so far.
  • MorehujaRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Sorry interesting story but just not enough action for me, found myself skipping chapters and paragraphs.
  • tenetRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    The grammar is horrible. Cool cover pic though.
  • EnhozRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    It's a nice plot,my cup of tea,really liking it so far.The grammar makes it unreadable,and it's not things like youre or something like that.Some sentences just don't make sense and leads me to belive that you simply don't know how to wirte in proper english,rather than making mistakes.
  • EamondRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    The author of this story appears to be under the impression that similar to their main character, they too should get a second chance at life.
    this story is posted additionally on this website as "doomsday 2020" and kept separate from this story. Why did the author post the same story twice? If you're gonna put in the effort to post it a second time, why not put in the effort to actually edit it or proofread it?
    imagine going back in time and still making 100% of the same mistakes?