Doomed Dungeon

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

Cass262

• Chapter Nine, Small Jewels Matter Too
  May 21, 2018
• Chapter Eight, ???Bastill???
  May 20, 2018
• Chapter Seven, Going Out With a BANG!
  May 20, 2018
• Chapter Six, The Itsy Bitsy... FUCK!
  May 19, 2018
• Chapter Five, Stronger, Faster, Smarter, Dead...
  May 18, 2018
• Chapter Four, The Dungeon of Castration
  May 17, 2018
• Chapter Three, Losing Their Head
  May 17, 2018
• Chapter Two, The Core Issue
  May 16, 2018
• Chapter One, Hangin’ Around the Campfire
  May 16, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• Anita JuliaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  vale a pena  acompanhar w   seguir
  quero  mais   capitulos
• Delectablebooklover8Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Ok, so I Did just binge read your story AND I'm already in a good mood from Before I started reading but still!!! I LOVE this book!!!
  Ok, I'm a rambler so I'll try to keep this short.
  Good start to your story. Interesting play on the, current, end villain. Not the first but still not bad at all. ^~^ Conscientious MC. Possible growth potential= both interesting and high on the future prospects. Nice play on randomly casual info drops. Please continue ^~^. Interesting concept for a litrpg spin for a dungeon. Please continue. ^~^ Would like to see more of this world. The Growth of this dungeon. How he handles ALL of the fun coming his way until he meets the roaming end boss and beyond lol. Who will he meet. What will he do. Etc. ECT. Ect. ^~^. And please continue to listen to us readers with a grain of salt. I'm not perfect and I don't expect my authors to be either. Whatever you changed because of the feedback you were given Did make a better impact for me as a reader. ^~^ You can't just toss a baby dungeon out into the world/wolves without at Least it's swaddling clothes on!!! YEESH! Lol. But in all seriousness. Congrats! You now have a stalker (read loyal fan) who will read all of your work for this, and Maaaybe, other works in the future. Depending on what you do lol. I tend to be a quiet stalker, when I'm not rambling on, so just know... Your works Will be read and they Will be enjoyed with Complete and Utter disregard for my sleep or any other situational awarenesses. I tend to do this for ALL of my favorite stories ^~^. I'm an addict and I Know it! To books, not drugs... I always have this Insatiable HUNGER for a good book, but they're often so randomly updated that I don't know when I'll get my next fix, when I'll find a new drug (read story) to stalk/follow, or if it will die on me in the future... Please don't stop writing... I Love my addiction and want to keep our well fed lol. Oh, and it's mostly for dungeon books right now so you Really lucked out lol. Ok
• MaxOsnesRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Review as of Chapter 10.
  Style: Amazing. Even with the need for an editor, I kept wanting to read more. The words were sucked into my brain, and there was never a time I felt that flow ever stopped.
  Story: Even though it is early, the story has a set goal, and has added a few unique twists to it. I'm thoroughly liking the story, but I am worried about how recent developments will turn out. However, I do have trust that the author will continue to write a good story.
  Grammar: The most notable thing is mispelled words in the early chapters. Thankfully these words have the same sounds, so the flow isn't interrupted. The author has gotten better in later chapters.
  Character: There hasn't been a lot of time to develop characters yet, but I'm enjoying the main character and there's nothing to detracting from the other characters. Exception: Story Spoilers Ahead. You have been warned.
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  I don't like the evil half of Bastill. I generally don't like evil characters, but he is one dimensional. All this character has is anger and hatred. It makes sense from a story point of view, but if he hangs around too much, then the story might start to drag a bit.
  Additional Thoughts:
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  I really love Bastill's statue creations and how they produce cool effects. I want more of those. It reminds me of that aspect of the Legendary Moonlight Scuptor.
• TekknosRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Miner Spoiler!! (only makes sence if you have read it or have read dungeon storys)
  only thing i dont get though is why he didnt get the earth heart and not the angel heart? he was a sculptor.
• Endless PavingRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Sixteen chapter in with a week or so between irregular chapters(plus or minus, that’s a guesstimate)
  Another dungeon story, of the blood sacrificed former human variety. There isn’t a stupid scatter brained tutorial pixie, so yay for that. So far there has been some creativity in the style with the mechanics of the abilities and resources affecting different things in different ways that aren’t as obvious as a no-brainer. There is dramatic conflict, as well as some amusing humour (especially that mana-overload scene). There are some goods twists in the strange things that can happen.
  The story is the good old evil bad guy thing with the added dynamic of a corrupted protagonist fallen to evil(with a twist), and the brave adventurers seeking treasure and glory(we’ll have to wait for deeper character development).
  The grammer is on the typo quality side but completely readable; there are just some ‘too’s instead of ‘to’s, some minors doing mining, and some unfortunate apostrophes. Fully ignorable, but any small flaw can become an annoyance.
  The characters have personality but could do with more depth. Complex motivations(meaning behaviours that diverge from their core personality depending on circumstance) are yet to be fully explored. So far each character  has been given obvious personal type and pretty much stuck to that single facet of themselves for all behaviour instead of revealing even the occasional contradictory action when given the chance. Grumpy guy is grumpy no matter what happens type of deal. They do all have motivations and interesting interests so they aren’t really cookie cutter cliches to a degree that I’d dislike them. The story has just been plot focused is all.
  Overall a good evening’s read so far and I’m waiting for more. :p
• GreatazuredragonRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Review as of chapter nineteen.
  This is a very solid story, with good pacing and development. But what I think shines the most in it is the interactions caused by the dungeon's creatures unique point of views and personalities. Be it stupidly happy idiotic gigantic squirrels, unknowingly sarcastic foxes comenting about their creator's hobby of playing with rocks or rabbit's pittingly thinking about their god's lack of inteligence, one thing is sure, they they tend to be highly amusing.
• Patrick DuffyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Good Read has a lot of potential, and some unique monster ideas all in all a good dungeon core story with humor now and then that causes some decent laughs... can't wait to see more of those trials get written about should cause a lot more laughs with those descriptions of how they affected the boss monster walking through the rooms to get to his.
• AvidReader9508Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Everything about it is awesome the characters have good personalitys, the interactions are interesting, and skills and creatures are super cool. please dont drop this wonderful fiction no matter if anyone else gives bad reviews or anything, ive seen too many good authors with awesome stories quit just because one person didnt like it.
• BusraToksozRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Doomed Dungeon starts like a cliché and classic dungeon core LitRPG, but it quickly rises far above that. What truly sets the series apart is how fast and effectively it shifts its focus to character psychology and deepens its cast.
  Bastill, in particular, is an excellent character — I genuinely loved him. His search for meaning and his broken state are handled incredibly well and make him very compelling. The story sometimes slows down on purpose, and those moments are some of its strongest. Daily routines, exhaustion, and quiet, unsettling moments are portrayed beautifully.
  The series does a great job of making both dungeon creatures and adventurers feel human. Kitsune especially delivers emotional moments that are completely forgotten in most dungeon stories. Themes like sacrifice are explored in a meaningful and detailed way.
  That said, the pacing can occasionally suffer due to frequent stat screens and long explanations. If those parts were a bit shorter, the overall flow would be much smoother.
  Overall, Doomed Dungeon is a genuinely strong, character-driven series. Even with some uncomfortable moments here and there, I enjoyed it a lot. Without its flaws, it could easily be a 4.5–5 out of 5. I wish the author the best of luck.
• HamsterDesTodesRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I love dungeon core stories. I truly do.
  This one got a good premise and the start of the tale is promising. Long chapters to boot, what's not to like?
  I tell you what: the grammar. The author desperately needs an editor, or at least a beta reader or two. The first 4 chapters weren't especially good, then came chapter 5 and I became hopeful, only to have said hopes crushed in chapter 6.
  I'm not talking about a few mistakes. It's dozens of them, and I'm not even counting the punctuation (I never figured English punctuation out myself).
  It's not mere typos, a spellchecker was clearly used. But missed words, superfluous words, wrong words and whatnot all slipped through. There are even continuity errors and I'm only 6 chapters in! Also don't even get me started on the math. Numbers are definitely not the authors best friend. Yet he always tells us hard numbers, instead of leaving things vague and less error-prone. whhyyyy?
  Maybe I'm more susceptible because English isn't my first language and I have to translate everything in my head, but it's pretty terrible if you can't read more than a couple of sentences without stumbling over something.
  If you don't mind the constant errors (does it get better later on?) you'll find an interesting take on the dungeon core genre.
  I'll probably return and read on after I've given my poor brain the chance to cool down.
  Hopefully, some beta reader can be found.