DK (Dropped)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

HolyEmperorOfMankind

• Chapter XXIII - War Council
  Jan 13, 2018
• Chapter XXII - Preparation
  Jan 13, 2018
• Chapter XXI - First Army Formations
  Dec 11, 2017
• Chapter XX - Entrance
  Dec 11, 2017
• Chapter XIX - Second Enemy?
  Dec 8, 2017
• Chapter XVIII - The plot armor is great in Slumbering
  Dec 7, 2017
• Chapter XVII - Circle of Shifts
  Dec 6, 2017
• Chapter XVI - The Pyramid
  Dec 5, 2017
• Chapter XV - The Cube
  Dec 4, 2017
• Chapter XIV - Third Night
  Dec 1, 2017
• Chapter XIII - Eggs, Larvae, Cocoons!
  Nov 30, 2017
• Chapter XII - Surprise in my Head
  Nov 29, 2017
• Chapter XI - South and East
  Nov 29, 2017
• Chapter X - North territory
  Nov 28, 2017
• Chapter IX - Family Supper?
  Nov 27, 2017
• Chapter VIII - Wasp Hierarchy
  Nov 27, 2017
• Chapter VII - Priorities
  Nov 27, 2017
• Chapter VI - Egg Chamber
  Nov 25, 2017
• Chapter V - New Things
  Nov 24, 2017
• Chapter IV - Using my Third Wish
  Nov 24, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• DonutDaddyRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  The idea itself so far is unique,
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  As of chapter 14 its a story about a man reborn as a skelton that ends up running a hive of wasps that are about half his size.
  but the grammar and spelling itself is just plain horrible, it makes it hard to really see the true story as the spelling makes it so hard to read. It distracts from the story when the author is spelling thought as tought and really as realy. It has the spark of an amazing story, it just needs TONS of editing. With a change of some words, correcting the spelling and then change of some sentence structure i can see this story truely becoming popular. It would help the charecter development and would improve the grammer and style by leaps in bounds, then it would make it easier for the unique story idea to pop out