Digital Demons
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Dispite how it sounds, activating the device that melted her brain was probably the best thing that ever happened to Blade, a former member of the slum districts. Though the process was extreme, instead of endless nothing or eternal suffering our heroine finds that her death was just a nessisary part of the digitization of her brain. Now she has joined the millions of rich and powerful who gave up their lives for a second chance in the fully imersive game world of Templa. Not one to be detered by a challange (or her death), Blade chooses to start in the unforgiving Demon Lands. This is known to be the hardest starting zone in all of Templa, but those who make it through are some of the best players in the game. Does Blade have what it takes?
Chapters are always 2000+ words with no relese schedual at the moment. Thanks for reading!
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Droped due to poor quality.
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- Status
- Cancelled
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Jarthon
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 242
- Views
- 89,477
Chapters(21 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- RoknarRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Well written, interesting story, a new take on mean girls. Think I will continue to follow as it has caught my interest.
- FlashfyreRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Based on the fact that dying sets you back to square one ,which makes it an absolutely terrible game that i don't believe millionaires would pay to play, just to lose all their hard work to people who kill them and act like the very thugs some of them hire to get rid of people. This leads to what i refer as the revenge boner chain, its all reacharounds that eventually come full circle.
- emberwingRoyal Road★★★ 2.5i like most of the story, but lets get a few things straight, what kind of person just gets over the fact that they're brain just got turned to mush? oh hey random stranger your brain just imploded, ah your gonna cry a bit yes that is logical, and you're done? nothing else? i mean the machine just went all Gallagher on your brain matter so to honest just being fine with it after a few seconds is kind of weird.
now that that's out of the way, what fucking moron cant't pronounce mana or dexterity if it is they're native tongue.
lastly (and i suppose this is just a personal problem) you just killed the main character so basically no matter what she does it will be utterly inconsequential to the world around her, yes she might change a few ones and zeros but hey at least she can fly now!
maybe an idea would be to keep her alive and let her make money through the device instead of just going yes your life that actually matters but i can't be bothered to write about since that would be to hard well........ good news! for me, not for you, you're brain-dead... no, no, wait not brain dead, just regular old dead - DivineCatRoyal Road★★ 2.0Finished chapter nine then dropped. sorry... but you should rewrite the story before the task becomes too much... absorb yourself into the story as you write, fill in the plot holes and think ahead maybe write notes on where to go and how to get there before writing and go into details more, love the story itself but the delivery was all wrong