Devil's Eyes [Urban Fantasy]

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Description

Shin is a 30-year-old blind single dad, doing his best to provide a peaceful life for his 10-year-old daughter. He treats her like a princess, but their world shatters when she is kidnapped by a cult known as Devil's Eyes. After reporting it to the police, Shin discovers the chief officer is also a part of the cult. With no help from the authorities, Shin takes matters into his own hands. His mission to rescue his daughter will force him to confront his dark past. He is not alone, though—his neighbor Fiona who appeared to be a typical 9-5 worker turned out to be a member of the Holy Hands a group dedicated to fight against Devil's Eyes, joins him in his fight to eradicate the cult.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Tiolu04

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 7
Views: 4,102

Chapters(22 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

littleruuRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story started with a bang. I really liked how you described the father's feelings about the child abduction alert. You didn't just list what he felt, but skillfully portrayed it through gestures, which is always a sign of a skilled writer.
The interactions between the characters are beautifully crafted; I nearly got teary-eyed from the moment between Shin and his daughter. The dialogues were straightforward and felt realistic—nothing seemed forced. Also, "Steven Queen" made me laugh out loud.
The text flowed smoothly and didn’t stumble. Some scenes could have been slowed down, for example, when focusing on Shin's thoughts and the events happening around him.
There was a nice balance between the dialogue, the description of the environment, and the action. At times, the scenes were dialogue-heavy, but it wasn't a constant issue.
I would have liked more focus on Shin's blindness, perhaps some description or narration of his feelings and how the disability affects his life. At times, it seemed like Shin could still see, for example, during unnatural situations, so this could have been explained a bit more.
Overall, I think the plot is very interesting ad unique, and I'll likely continue following its development. I really enjoyed the story, and I can 100% confidently recommend it to others!