Deviance
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Eujia, the supposed Chosen, has been kept locked up in the castle for most of her life, but she's never forgotten her childhood in the capital's vast slums. Sneaking out at night, she picks the pockets of the rich or robs their homes to fund meals for the poor. But when she takes the initiative to assassinate the corrupt emperor, someone beats her to it, saving her life only to ruin it. Who is this killer? And can Eujia escape the fate he shoved her toward?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- lissarafferty
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 3,772
Chapters(33 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- iiGhilliezRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0First of all, the grammar and writing style are really great, match up to most other well-written novels. The character's actions and thoughts are written in a meaningful, to-the-point way, so story is simple and easy to follow.
There aren't too many issues, specifically blatant ones; however, I seem to have lost interest in the story. This is due in part to a love triangle. I am not a fan of love triangles, however minor they are, and I personally ship the male and female leads. Whether the author intends to as well or not? I'm not sure. Either way, the triangle bothered me.
Another part that irks me was the massive amount of drama that seemingly no one saw coming. Everything that happens is the result of one group backstabbing another, continuously. My problem is that after so many backstabs, none of the characters expect it.
Besides these minor opinion-based faults, the story seems very good, and I'm sure many of the readers here will come to enjoy the story when it garners more attention. To the author, well done and continue with what you're doing; don't stop just because I personally lost interest.