Echo, 18 year old man, with a horrible past is summoned to an another world with his class. The reason for their summoning is Simple: kill the demon lords.

AN: it won't be the usual "MC is weak or/and has useless skill and later is betrayed by his classmates" kinda story.

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foldervralRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

First off the story itself is really good. It has a MC that does not take bullshit and does not just follow along with those around him blindly. His magic is not very clearly explained as all it seems to do is allow him to cast form multiple affinities withought having to first train them although a limited amount of times. You do not know whether it takes the same amount of mana as everyone else or whether it is free becasue his cards are being used to cast the magic. The amin cahracter himself is interesting but the freindly side characters (his love interest or interests) are rather cliche and flat.
Final warning if you cannot stand grammer mistakes or interupted flow then do not read this story as there are a large amount of both. Sometimes a phrase or sentence needs to be read twice in order to understand it.

EtezRoyal Road

★★ 1.5

Grammar is just as bad as his old fictions (many small errors, sometimes you don't understand what actually happens, most sentences feel as if words were just jumbled together etc).
Style is pretty bad, too, because hr changes from third p.o.v. to first to third and something in between every few sentences. It sometimes changes in the middle of a paragraph, too.
Plot(story) could be pretty interesting when you take the cringy and completely unreal conversations and monologues away.
Character are the cliche norm. 1 or 2 sentences of the person and you know what "type" they are. Story is rushed too and from time to time someone pops in for a few sentences and you got the whole cliche type that the person is... If you know what I mean.
This story(plot is good everything else sucks) could have potential like his old ones but through all the things mentioned above it is the same failure as his old ones. At least in my opinion....

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