Death's Lily

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Description

Common Grounds, a coastal melting pot built out of the remains of many small nations as a final bastion against the flames of war. War has long since passed scarring the lands and the people left in them, but the walls still stand tall and proud. A symbol of protection and peace after a great turmoil, and a beacon to those seeking fame, fortune, security, or perhaps a place to belong.

Eight "Classes', from full frontal warfare to artisans, are trained in the city and act as mercenary forces on a day-to-day basis, drawing in many individuals hoping to be accepted and apprenticed.

Lily, one such individual, arrives to start again, but not all her ghosts are willing to stay in the past...

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: YukikoKitsune

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 75
Views: 35,881

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BedwigRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This story is alright. The pace is pretty good, and the plot is interesting for now, but it's the grammar that really needs fixing.
The author constantly forgets to add apostrophes and commas. It really gets annoying after a while. The sentences are also written really wierdly sometimes too.
The characters so far aren't very developed. All of them blush really easily, including the MC when with her background she should be used to a little teasing. All the teachers seem pretty stupid to me, and are constantly asking MC questions. Her roomates blush at every interaction witht the MC. Too many charcters are introduced, and not enough explanation as to why and how they were.
Either it's me, but I constantly feel as if I'm missing a few details within every chapter. It sometimes feels as if they were walking on the streets on moment, and the next they're in a building buying food, like they just teleported into it.
This story doesn't suck, but the author should proof read it more.