Death Becomes Him: An Age of Steam and Sorcery Novel

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Description

What does a highschool boy do when his life spirals out of control?

Play video games, of course!

What happens when the game starts to play you back though? How does one young man deal with bullies both real and digital? How does he cope when he's certain his parent's impending divorce is entirely his fault?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Patrick Charlton-O'Shea

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYADVENTURESCI-FIMALE LEAD

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Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
117
Views
97,478

Chapters(81 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Spirit of YggdrasilRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Overall: Really good, I enjoy the parts with the family. Ignore the rest of the review and read now.
    Style: No big chunks of text, is readable. No problem.
    Grammar: Near Perfect
    Story: Interesting, no grinding and feels original.
    Character: MC is not acting like a 7th grader (I know one) but is ok-ish considering "he's got juvenile PTSD and is extremely socially awkward." Do try to mention something like that in the story and not just in the comments. Could have the parents or the school official to mention it. Maybe I just skipped though it. Everything else is good.
    PS: Good that MC dies sometimes.
    Also FIRST REVIEW ON ROYALROAD for me!