Daybreak (FIrst Draft)
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Description
ATTENTION: This story has been taken down, as I am thoroughly rewriting and re-publishing it. Sorry for the inconvenience.
As a calamity befalls himself and everybody he knows, Vreil is left alone in the world. After a chance encounter with a wizard and the discovery of his extraordinary powers, he is dragged into a revolution against a king he knows nothing about. As things spiral out of his control and nothing is what it seems, join Vreil and his companions in their adventures across the lands. Witness the dawn of an era!
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This story does not contain gaming elements, martial arts cultivation etc. It's a standard fantasy novel.
This is my first effort to publish anything so any suggestions or comments will be highly appreciated, as long as they were made in good will. Thank you!
Information
- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Winged Wolf
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 14
- Views
- 2,926
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- HorstRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Take note that i generally rate stories a lot lower than the average user on RRL, because almost no story deserves 5 star ratings and to be honest almost all stories are overrated on this site.
Grammar is fine, little to no mistakes
Style is average, nothing to note here
Characters so far are a mix of typical fantasy stereotypes and some more refined characters. Some of them are cardboard cutouts for fantasy stories, while the MC atleast has some depth to him.
Story is the point that pulls the rating down for me, the prologue arc began quite good but as soon as he reached the hideout it went from quite good to average at best. Can't say much about the second arc for now.