Dark blood

Self-Published

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Description

A young man oblivious to the blinding lights until the end, presented with a choice, makes a decision that will influence his life.

In a far away land, a woman births a stillborn, the homes of thousands are in danger, and a world that is filled with all kinds of dangers, magical energies, and untold treasures is about to enter an age of turmoil and conflict. An age of death, destruction, and slaughtering of the innocent.

In such a world, a cry of anguish can lead to a small hope, a cry of desperation can lead to a warm and loving embrace , and a cry of helplessness can lead to freedom.

Will one man rise above all, or will he fail to stand up from the dirt from whence he came?

We can only find out in the future, can't we?

PS: This is my first fiction, so I would really appreciate some feedback, since I don't know if it is any good at all. Also, the creator of the cover is winRoot. If you want a good cover or something illustrated, he is a very good artist and will take commisions. I highly recommend him.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Bobo112000

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADMALE LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
151
Views
125,582

Chapters(42 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • humble readerRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
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    Overall, this is, what i feel to be, an incredibly unique story that is taking a refreshing new take at the reincarnation genre. First, instead of being reincarnated with his memories, like every other reincarnation, he gets reincarnated with his developed thought process instead. Second, he’s an actual human and not some furry or black transgendered vampire.  Lastly, he was born into a normal family that isn’t incredibly impoverished or stupidly rich.
    STYLE: As of now it almost feels like a xanxia, I don’t know why, it just does. Normally I would hate this but it fits very well with the main character and while I can’t say that I love it, it is bearable. As for the ease of reading and dialogue between characters the style is excellent with no flaws that are obvious to me. I am able to understand everything that is going on perfectly and I have no questions about who is talking. I do however wish that the author would go into more detail about the setting. It is enough to understand everything but not quite enough for me to be able to perfectly envision the areas that the MC goes to throughout the story. Don’t get me wrong, the description of the setting doesn’t detract from the story, It could just simply make the story better with more detail.
    GRAMMAR: I can’t recall any major mistakes as of now, or really any for that matter. Not much else to say as this is just the grammar.
    STORY: We start off very well with the MC’s parents being introduced and described with great depth. The MC is then left on the door steps of his parent’s house by a spider  that is being controlled by his real and edgy/OP  Mom. for some reason the spider really likes him and it’s kind of creepy, if not a little kinky. But hey, I’m into it. So yeah, the beginning is great as far as I’m concerned but I d
  • AzaerRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    Style : The style come across like something from xianxia but is entirely lacking in that department in terms of real change or actions its just too vague. making me also wonder how on earth it has LITRPG  as a tag when in 38 chapters i have only seen 2 screens and read 8-10 referencs to skills or some kind of system. Everything and when i say everything i mean everything is overly fleshed out.
    Story: So far there has been no real plot development apart from ten tonne blankets of foreshadowing on everything and everyone. The strength of characters is overstated and then understated constantly, the magic system just seems overly complex and vague with no set parameters aside from whatever the chapter needs to sound more complicated and mysterious.
    Grammar: All in all the Grammar is very well done with few to little mistakes to be noticed.
    Characters:  All the characters are so overly fleshed out its hard to keep and accurate track of them along with everyones agenda with there infamous ten tonne blankets of foreshadowing. they all seem to possess a story which at the devolopment of story will never take place for another 10 years IRL .