Curses

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

Accidental_Loop

• 11. Change of hands
  Feb 26, 2021
• 10. Revealing Important Information
  Feb 24, 2021
• 9. A really boring class
  Feb 24, 2021
• 8. Fun times
  Feb 23, 2021
• 7. The Talk
  Feb 21, 2021
• 6. The Drive home
  Feb 20, 2021
• 5. Even Luckier
  Feb 19, 2021
• 4. Mental Freedom
  Feb 18, 2021
• 3. I must be one lucky boy
  Feb 17, 2021
• 2. Really... Novice
  Feb 16, 2021
• 1. I GET TO GO BACK!
  Feb 15, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• EllerisRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Style
  This is a very good start, and I like the style of the writing. Your main character feels relatable, and has realistic reactions to the situation that he is in. A more in depth review of the classes and stats would be very nice and would help readers comprehend the story a little better.
  Story and Character Scores
  I know there's only 4 chapters, so it feels unfair to put a 1 for the story and character score. However, it also felt unfair to put them at a 5, so I went with the middleman, Mr 3/3.5 stars.  I think for the early chapters, there should be a friendly rivalry between Zain and his friend in order to help drive the early story until later conflict.
  Grammar Score
  Your writing is riddled with some minor grammatical errors, but it will be a very easy fix with the help of ya boy. Nothing crazy, just a few missing commas and or extra commas.
  Finishing Statement
  This is a very well done few chapters, and I look forward to seeing what your mind can conjure for the upcoming ones. I will look forward to reading more soon, good luck and praise the sun.  \[T]/
• Mad SadieRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I get the feeling this will eventually become a fairly standard tower-climb litrpg, but it's taking quite some time to get there. Not that that's a bad thing; the author takes their time to explain everything relevant, and the chapters are short and to the point.
  The characters seem interesting enough, the typical smart introvert / strong extrovert duo. The MC is well written and relatable, even if the backstory is (as far as I can tell) unneccesarily depressing. There might be future need for this, there's already been hints at things going on behind the scenes that will come into play in the future. The tower system is well thought-out, the curses themselves interesting.
  The grammer is average, a few mistakes here and there, but nothing too distracting. The style is good, and enough to make up for the occasional misspell.
  All in all, if you like short chapter slow burns, this is the story for you! If you want 5k-long chapters with lots of punching things... maybe less so. But it never hurts to try.
  (Plz do me a favor and ignore these extra 24 words which I added so that the website will accept my review lol)