Cultivating Queen of the 13th Realm (Being Reborn under the name "Cultivating Queen")
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Description
Holy fuck if you knew why I disappeared you wouldn't blame me.
I am still not too good but if you somehow find this, I am still alive and still plan on working on this project. I don't remember exactly what my plans are and I am actually in the midst of redoing this book. I'm going to be leaving this one alone and start off with a fresh plate.
I'll make it more adult themed and less of an anime style piece of fan service fuck bag.
The new page for this novel...
https://royalroadl.com/fiction/16425/cultivation-queen
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Panda-Chan
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- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 242
- Views
- 96,389
Chapters(21 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- gnarlytreemanRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Ok, this work of fiction is a learning process for the author. It is missing a lot of descriptions, character building plot building, and other necessities. As a work in progress it is readable, but there are also several huge logic jumps and time skips. The story is about a man from a fictional scifi world reborn as a baby girl in a chinese fantasy setting. The main issue are in character building, and empire building vs unrealistic age brackets and time references. There is not good linear time flow while the mc is growing up. I think chapter 13&14 got a little better, so the writing style may get better.
It is rather obvious the reviewer Yinko did not read the story. Aifer probably did, but not to the point when things gained a little more flow.
Because of the previous bad reviews, i looked at the story 4 or 5 times before attempting to read it. Do not be scared off by the bad reviews. The writer responds well to contructive criticism. - AiferRoyal Road★★ 2.0I'm sorry, I don't like the way the story is written.
The author/narrator is to much, I want to delv into the story of Alexa but I keep being interupted by the narrator explaining something about the story. It feels like there's two sentences of story building and then four senteces of info dump. It has turned me off the story. - YinkoRoyal Road★ 0.5Yet another assassin with a heart of gold. There has never been a story with that premise that was worth reading, and there never will be.