A world where powers are everything, Khan Freax is born without any. He is born a sagaru. How will he overcome these impossible odds and make a name for himself and his family, and rewrite the fabric of society?

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Hello I am MullenRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

I'm giving this story full Mark's because although, there are basic improvements needed (spelling, wording sentence structure) I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and hope the author sticks with it because at its core this is a damn good read
Thanx for the story :]

BeyogiRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

This story is about a young man, who's grown up in a world with super powers, but seemingly doesn't have any (it's inactive and might be something like super healing). As a Sagaru he's a bullied existence. With luck and training he nonetheless manages to join an advanced combat school.
Overall I'm not convinced of the worldbuilding of the dog eat dog world, but the main problem of this story would be the rather basic prose. It reads a bit like a highschool students first attempt at storywriting and maybe it is. If you like that sort of story it's okay, if you're not a particular fan of the genre I'd look elsewhere.

ConfigRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

The idea is good, but also overused. Many people have tried to write. Some may say it's like my hero academia with a different villainous group as one reviewer said. The innate "power" appeared way too quickly. He could've been some sort of shining light for the Sagarus, although he did get into this prestigious school as one, his ability appeared fairly quickly.

Rate the RateRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

Sentence structure.
Paragraphs, It’s almost unreadable to be honest.
The story is ok and if you interested in this type of story you might enjoy it. Honestly decent for a first time writer, and I implore you to carry on and atleast give it a go.
But a big downside is that first some sentaces are structured poorly so the words and ideas come of slightly weird and have to reread several times before getting the idea. Second everything is written in big blocks of text that only change when a major point has been crossed for example if it’s still on the same subject don’t expect any space for your eyes and just a massive block of text with no spaces apart from inbetween words. It’s structured like this and is just a block, I tried to give it a go and thought it might get better past the first chapter but it didn’t.
English might not be his or hers language or it might, spellings isn’t that bad but I do agree that it looks like a first time writer. You’ll get better at it and I hope this doesn’t discourage you as it seems you have some great ideas.
But before ideas and a story the basics are important.

ZekRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

This should be labeled fan fiction. It's almost the same charecters as MHA with different names, powers and a new villain. There personalitys are extremely similar, the events happen in almost the same order. So far it reads like a MHA copy with the char names changed.
sorry for the heat but I'm a diehard MHA fan and this seems a little too similar I'll check in the future to see if the plot diverges.

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