Cornerstone (rough draft)
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Description
When a call goes out into the universe,a young man, down on his luck, decides to answer. Ripped from his old life and even his body, Jack Hearth must now decide what needs to be done to protect those he has claimed as his own. Not all is as it seems though. Those in power do not approve of his quest and will seek to bring ruin to his efforts.
This is my very first work, so I ask for understanding should I make a mistake. This story is not on of those stories where the MC gains power and immediately decides to use it for violence. While those types of stories are fun, this isn't one of those. I will average betweern 1k-2k words per chapter for the foreseeable future. Please leave a comment below to let me know how I am doing.
Lore chapters have been removed
Chapter release schedule
-friday evening
-sunday evening
For the copies of my new draft check out my patreon
https://www.patreon.com/user?u=46645070
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- AbeJones
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 23
- Views
- 16,477
Chapters(43 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Iccy_strawberryRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I liked the characters quite a bit, like a lot. So far, the plot is promising as well. Nevertheless, the only problem I see so far is with the dialogue. When you make it like that, it sounds foreign, you don't know if it's just me, but if it had regular dialogue, I feel like I'd enjoy the story more. Other than this, keep up the excellent job, please.