Chronicler’s Tale

Self-Published

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Description

When two universes are merged together due to the betrayal of gods, chaos descends on the newly reborn universe. This is the story of one young man who is thrust into a new and dangerous world beyond his wildest imagination. He must learn how to navigate this unknown world and how to survive his encounters with its deadly inhabitants.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Pibbs

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTURESUPERNATURALMALE LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
113
Views
81,231

Chapters(60 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • angryfanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The only complaint I have is the number of chapters released every month.
  • GarrdorRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    As of chapter 9, it's pretty good so far. The MC tries to make informed, intelligent decisions, but also due to unknown factors and just being human makes mistakes. It's a good balance between a smart MC and not too much plot armor.
    Seriously though, a major complaint is the size of the paragraphs. Looking at them is a little daunting, they should be broken up a little more. I didn't even know I had such a hair trigger for paragraph size, but apparently I do. Right now that's the only thing preventing me from enjoying this story.
    Keep up the good work!
  • Mauro JuniorRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The main character can be dumb and smart at the same time, has a gigantic plot armor, but it is not so easy to notice.
    The main character has some illogical moments and inconsistent ideals.
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    I also noticed some inconsistencies in the story, and logical flaws, like the headlines, because he got no headlines related to certain things, such as the headline a brave fool.
    Early on he gains Ax ability simply by using a pick to hit a wolf's head, but despite showing advanced tracking and footprint analysis techniques he does not gain any skills in this area.
    Another thing that disappointed me was that he saw that it is possible to tame animals through the Goblins, but he has no attempt to tame animals. He has not studied any plants or tried to use them for his own benefit, I would have tried to plant some as a defense. in my house, other than that one thing I noticed was that at no time did you talk about normal and natural animals here becoming more magical because logic dictates that with magic entering some animals would become different, same for native plan
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