Choice, Chance, and Consequence [Reverse Isekai/Team LitRPG]

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Status

Cancelled

Author

Ellen Taylor

What readers say about Choice, Chance, and Consequence [Reverse Isekai/Team LitRPG]

• “Story: Like the title, it was a page turner, and I blazed through it. The start eases you in with the exploration of characters, witty banters, and then smashes you with the twist when things are fleshed out, really nicely done. And good job on the setup of…”

  Aleth08Royal Road5.0 / 5

• “It was fun reading a tabletop story done this way! Very well-written Characters. Nick and Derek's banter is like a comfy couch you sink into after a long day – it just feels right. You can practically smell the pizza and hear the dice rolling. And yeah, eve…”

  Bookman9Royal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(10)

• Aleth08Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Story:
  Like the title, it was a page turner, and I blazed through it. The start eases you in with the exploration of characters, witty banters, and then smashes you with the twist when things are fleshed out, really nicely done. And good job on the setup of the game; I wish I could eat that salsa too while I was reading this. Had no complaints, and the fans of the genre will love this.
  Style:
  The writing was vivid with a really good amount of touch on the details. I'm a fan of such work where authors go the extra miles to work on the details, however minor they might be, so I really liked seeing that here. Really nice descriptive writing too, the world came alive along with the characters. Another thumbs up.
  Grammar:
  There was no glaring issue apart from minor typos here and there which could easily be fixed from a proof read and reader's edit suggestions, which the author was quite receptive of. Good job again.
  Character:
  I would say this is the strongest point of the book, the depth and the details of the characters. Through their dialogues, they all felt alive. And I really liked how the characters had their own personality.
  Overall, a solid 5/5.
• Bookman9Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  It was fun reading a tabletop story done this way!
  Very well-written Characters. Nick and Derek's banter is like a comfy couch you sink into after a long day – it just feels right. You can practically smell the pizza and hear the dice rolling. And yeah, even the struggle to sync up schedules feels oddly relatable, like you're part of the gang trying to coordinate your next adventure over group chat. Too bad things never go according to plan though.
  But what hooks you is the tabletop aspect. The way they describe the scenes and actions is so vivid, it's like watching a movie in your mind. Even the frustration over their dice rolls can be felt.
  After the big reveal, I'm left wondering how they are going to continue the session and campaign. And the pacing? Smooth as butter. There's never a dull moment, but they also know when to slow down and let the tension simmer.
  But let's not forget about the dialogue. It's like they've got a script doctor hiding in their DM screen. Every word feels natural, every joke lands perfectly. It's the kind of banter you wish you had with your crew.
  In short, Whether you're a seasoned D&D player or just dipping your toes in, you'll find yourself drawn into their world from the get-go. Can't wait to see where they take us next!
• DarkodiaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The author does a great job of setting the scene, describing the snacks and the atmosphere, which makes it feel very relatable. The dialogue feels natural and helps to reveal the personalities of the characters, especially Derek and Nick. The mention of their friendships, past relationships, and family dynamics adds depth to the story and keeps the reader engaged. The dynamic between Derek and Nick, and the way they navigate unexpected circumstances during game night was well done. The story does a great job of capturing their friendship and their dedication to their gaming group, even when faced with setbacks like Tyler's car accident. The dialogue feels natural, and the details about their game and their dice superstitions add depth to the narrative. The banter between Nick and Derek as they navigate their tabletop gaming session with the AI game master was hilarious. They really didn't seem to want the AI for a game master. The dialogue feels real and captures the playful dynamics of their friendship. The way they interact with the AI and each other adds humor and depth to the story, making it engaging to read. Additionally, the inclusion of details about their characters and the game mechanics adds richness to the narrative, immersing the reader in their gaming world. Overall, I like it.
• Eli FreyssonRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Two dudes are trying to finish the final boss of the tabletop campaign they've been playing, along with others, for years. And then things get weird.
  I have quite limited experience with the genre/s this story tackles, but this one has much more patience than other such stories I've checked out. It takes its time introducing us to the real-world (fictional real world, that is) characters, their situation and history, and just how much the game means to them, and how much they've poured into it over the years. So they, one in particular, actually feel like they would get deeply invested in living an actual game world.
  Buildup is good; it hints at a story with something to it. And the characters are entertaining enough that it holds my interest without anything spectacular taking place yet.
  I didn't spot a single error. The characters take like regular people. The narration itself didn't wow me, but there's nothing wrong with it either: Just a normal narrative voice.
  For the portion I've read so far, only two characters get any real limelight, but they're likeable enough. Two dudes who have been friends for ages, and it shows. And they're dealing with the gradual disintegration of their pen-and-paper rpg group. Which... I can relate to. So bonus points there.
• EmolRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I want to start by saying I love the reverse isekai concept. It's such a cool idea, and this story pulls it off so well that it really makes me want to read more of it.
  Style
  The writing is excellent, with prose that is carefully chosen and most importantly, fits the scenes perfectly. The story boasts dialogue that flows smoothly between characters, each with their distinct tones and voices, making it effortless and enjoyable to read. It’s technically superb.
  Story
  The reverse isekai concept is a really fun one, and this one pulls it off really well. Using D&D characters is an innovative concept that hasn't been done very much, but this story does a great job of taking its time to add depth to the world, environment, character relationships, and personalities, making it a really engaging read.
  Grammar
  No issues at all, it's easy to read with nothing to distract from the story.
  Characters
  This is the story's strongest asset. All the characters are really well done, have depth, and real personalities that you can laugh and empathise with. I would also like to pay tribute to the dialogue, which is brilliantly written and fits each of the characters' established personalities well and consistently. This is really hard to do, so great work with this.
  Overall
  I really enjoyed this story. I have favorited and followed it as I am excited to see where this goes. Highly recommended!
• FlokistarRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The first thing that caught my attention after reading the first chapter was how well the characters were fleshed out. Their personality and interaction really made me believe this happened in real life. Really well done.
  Grammar: I didn't notice anything that would break immersion, the author clearly spent time with editing, and making sure the chapters were as polish as possible.
  Story: I haven't read a reverse Isekai before, so this experience was unique and kinda give me inspiration to write a story like this as well. I haven't read much to talk about world building, so I'll just leave it at that.
  Style: the story is written in the third person pov which is my favorite. The author clearly knows how to write clean story with amazing prose that get you to the point, and paint a vivid images of what is happening.
  Characters: this is where the story truly shine. The interaction between the characters felt real as everyone had their own personality and unique voice. I don't know if the author came up with these characters on his own or took inspiration from his friends, but they just felt too real.
  Overall, I really enjoyed the story and it's unique concept. Recommend reading it.
• HA-GreeneRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The idea of a reverse isekai is quite fascinating, and the methodology behind their arrival makes enough sense, though I am very curious about who else might have found their way into the world given how extensive the damages were behind that TPK. I'm fully expecting some baddies to pop out of the woodwork ahead, its just a matter of whom they will appear before, if they would also follow the standard established for the heroes. Who is gonna roll their dice?
  A lot of thought and effort went into the background for CCNC.
  The characters are the highlight for me. Every interaction is smooth and natural. Each of them feels unique and realistic, with their own flaws-- Derek is just a touch too committed to the game, Nick fell in with some bad folks, Evelyn can be self-centered. And Walt is the typical antagonistic 'I know better than you and you will obey me' attitude that makes me loath him on principal. He may be an overbearing parent, but he's a massive jerk too. Then we reach the heroes, and they feel fleshed out as well. I can only wonder when Grizzizzik will give up the dice to Nick, and why he's holding out after seeing Milo.
  Grammar is impeccable, next to no mistakes.
  In all, a character-driven, well-crafted story. I'll look forward to reading more down the road.
• It's HartRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Were you the Nick or the Derek in your gaming group? Tag yourself!
  Choice, Chance, and Consequence is the kind of unique story that really shows the possibilities of web serials. It's part coming-of-age story, part inversion of an Isekai story, and a rollicking fantasy romp. Duffer Brothers level of nostalgia going on over here.
  Grammar -- Clean writing! Never had any issues with this.
  Style -- There are a lot of characters and concepts to introduce here, and while the names (players and their characters, plus some sexy ice daddies and overbearing normie daddies) can be a bit overwhelming at first, the author does a nice job of keeping it all straight. Very pacey with authentic dialogue.
  Characters -- This is where the book really shines. The real world characters feel like people I've hung out with and their creations do a nice job of reflecting them. Can't wait to see what happens as our players come to grips with their characters. There's so much room to explore here and the author does well with digging into emotions while never ignoring an opportunity for a wisecrack.
  Story -- You're going to want to keep clicking 'next chapter.' The dramas are very human -- like outgrowing your friends or needing to get away from your family -- but the plot is still propulsive, and I get the feeling there are bigger things on the horizon.
  Stay out of dice jail! Give this a read.
• Liam HillsRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Style:
  The style is very engaging. It's snappy and makes you feel like you're right there with the characters. The banter is fun, and makes the story feel very authentic.
  I really like the way the AI voice is written. I can clearly hear the stiff, robotic, voice in my head haha.
  Grammar:
  Pretty much perfect. I don't think I noticed any errors myself, and any that were there in the past were already pointed out and promptly fixed. Nothing to complain about here.
  Story:
  We see two boys meeting to play a D&D-like game, but the rest of the group couldn't come for various reasons. It was supposed to be their last session, and scheduling had only gotten harder and harder as they grew older. Instead of postponing the session even further (which would most likely mean it would never happen), they decide to play it themselves.
  The GM isn't there, and neither are most of the players, so they do the best they can and improvise. They control multiple characters each, and use a shitty AI as their GM. It's not great, but it works.
  I loved seeing the characters make the best of a bad situation, and also how much fun they ended up having with it.
  Characters:
  The characters are fantastic! Their interractions are great, and they're very relatable. They feel like real people, and real friends. I especially like Nick. His entire family situation is explored quite a lot, and it adds a lot of depth to his character. I feel myself rooting for him strongly.
  Overall:
  Great. The story is good, the characters are awesome, the style compliments the story really well, and there are no annoying grammatical errors that take you out of the moment.
• Lucian T. EinarRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Overall:
  "Choice, Chance, and Consequence" is a captivating and unique tale that blends elements of a reverse Isekai with LitRPG, offering readers a fresh and exciting narrative. The story follows a group of friends as they navigate the unexpected arrival of their tabletop game characters in the real world, leading to a series of challenges and adventures.
  Style:
  The author's writing style is engaging and immersive, drawing readers in with vivid descriptions and well-developed characters. The story is written in the third person point of view, allowing for a clear and cohesive narrative that keeps the readers hooked from start to finish.
  Story:
  The plot of "Choice, Chance, and Consequence" unfolds gradually, introducing readers to the characters and their deep connection to the game world before delving into the complexities of their newfound reality. The story is character-driven, focusing on the dynamics between the group of friends and their unique personalities as they navigate both the real and fantasy worlds.
  Grammar:
  The writing in "Choice, Chance, and Consequence" is polished and error-free, showcasing the author's attention to detail and dedication to crafting a seamless reading experience. The dialogue flows naturally, adding depth to the characters and driving the narrative forward with ease.
  Character:
  The characters in the story are a standout feature, with each one coming to life through their distinct personalities and interactions. From Derek's dedication to gaming to Nick's complex family dynamics, the characters feel authentic and relatable, making it easy for readers to connect with their journey. The friendships and conflicts within the group add layers of depth to the story, keeping readers invested in their fates.
  In conclusion, "Choice, Chance, and Consequence" is a must-read for fans of fantasy, LitRPG, and coming-of-age stories. With its well-crafted plot, engaging characters, and immersive world-building, this novel is sure to delight reade