Chaos Slinger

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Long ago, a mythical figure forged paths from realm to realm and advanced civilization to heights undreamed, built on the foundations of technology, science, and a mysterious aberrant power only a fraction were born to wield. One such champion became the greatest of all and led the people to a golden age of wonder, forging science and mystery into one. But the figure ascended, or abandoned the realms, or died... depending on who you asked. The people could not bear the loss of their god and soon they too became lost. And so the great society of these many realms waned and inevitably fell, disaster and war causing a spiral dragging civilization to the brink of annihilation — perhaps the very pit of hell.

Would it rise again, or sink ever deeper? Out on the frontier, in a scorched, forgotten domain, a dormant chance at the fantastical and impossible, the horrific or wondrous... brews.

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The hunter andAzakansensory adept Deros Îýteron lived his life for his people and the woman he loved — bonds forged for a lifetime. But fate calls and the bold must go to meet it, to their tragedy and glory. Into the wasteland of great scorched Hamellion, for honor and compassion, for duty and spirit — for answers — Deros and nine other fierce members of the Taldecca journey out to meet the horrors of revelation...

The realities ofevolution.

What can you expect? An epic inspired by both fantasy and sci-fi, designed with a steadily increasing pace until latter crescendos. Expect a unique setting and high detail. Unusual peoples and cultures. Often heavy descriptions to paint the scene. Chapters frequently on the long side. Occasionally other viewpoints (but not for a hundred thousand words in, or more).A protagonist that will grow into his own with time; he starts out decently capable, but clueless of his true capacity.

What should younotexpect? Direct smut — or any particular extreme thing just for its sake alone. Romancedoeshave relevance, its threads woven into the fabric of the story. The tale is simulative, aiming for deep connections and understandings of character experience while obeying their reality. All is intended to serve the story. Many characters will think about sex or talk about it to some degree, as well as the possibility of conducting in it behind a fade-to-black. Nudity can also occur.

No f-bombs, though other curse words can make an appearance, and there will be new words and substitutions.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: RainHarlow

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.9/ 5.0
Followers: 60
Views: 20,569

Chapters(31 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

BggeerrRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I normally don't give any writing of a book I've read such high ratings, but this story" Chaos Slinger" is in my opinion very well written. The style score is a well written with a unique style story. I honestly think at times that when I was reading that i was actually watching a movie. The story score is unbelievable. There is so much detail in chapter after chapter the story was lit up like I dont know what. It all fit together like a glove. The grammer score seems to me to be great. I'm not much with grammer but this story never seemed to be in need of correction. The character score it is beyond words to me because it is great. I'm serious. Good job. Always defineing the characters to the point I actually thought i was in story. I could see in my mind what was going on. That is hard to do. The overall story so far has me excited to the point I can't wait for next chapter to be posted. This story has you up and reading . i seriously wish I could've read this story from beginning to end.. You know what I mean? It's that good😁
CalynCorrRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I’m giving this five of five stars without reservation or hesitation because it is some of the best fiction I have read in a long time, taking a place in my heart with Tolkien, Orson Scott Card, and the like.
Chaos Slinger is solid and entertaining storytelling, with often just plain fun banter and dialogue-driven scenes as well as action-packed and exhilarating scenes that literally left me breathless and my heart racing.
The plot-construction is meticulous, yet so well-written as to flow right by in the movement of the story. Well-paced and detailed world-building throughout adds skillfully to the characterization and plot. The action sequences are well-crafted, clear, concise, and fast-paced, yet somehow managing to also introduce new story elements, seed clues to mysteries, develop characters, and further overall long-term plot.
The setting is captivating in its forlorn beauty, ominous melancholy, sobering severity and has such astonishing visuals that I truly long for seeing this work produced one day in film.
There is even a special short-term fun in that each chapter title is a bit of a mini-mystery that is revealed by the chapter’s end.
Quite unique to this story is the use of foreign/alien languages. This adds a delightful and additional element of immediacy to the tale which is already engaging on all levels. The story-telling is completely absorbing, providing effective emotional and relational connection with the individuals and the people-groups, allowing the reader to truly inhabit the story and live through the tender moments, harrowing ordeals, and reality-shifting challenges facing the characters.
There are relationally rich and beautiful family and tribal dynamics with characters both tough and tender who become like family. The full cast of characters ranges from delightful to loathsome, dangerous and awe-inspiring. Some carry history and mystery that may or may not be immediately revealed! There are heart-rending moments; also times of awe, frus
LUCIFER36Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Prepare to be transported to a world of wonder and mystery in "Chaos Slinger." This mesmerizing tale takes readers on an unforgettable journey filled with magic, intricate plot twists, and a cast of captivating characters. With its seamless prose, immersive storytelling, and imaginative worldbuilding, this book is a must-read for anyone seeking an enchanting escape.
Grammar:
The writing in "Chaos Slinger" is a testament to the author's skillful command of language. The prose flows effortlessly, painting vivid scenes that ignite the reader's imagination. Impeccable grammar and spelling create a smooth reading experience, allowing readers to fully immerse themselves in the story without distraction. The author's attention to detail shines through, ensuring a polished narrative that leaves no room for grammatical errors.
Story:
At the heart of "Chaos Slinger" lies a captivating and intricately woven story. Set against a backdrop of magical realms and political intrigue, the plot unfolds with a series of unexpected twists and turns. The protagonist's journey, fraught with personal challenges and external conflicts, keeps readers on the edge of their seats. As secrets are revealed and alliances are tested, the story grips the reader's attention, leaving them eager to uncover the next layer of this mesmerizing tale.
Style:
The author's writing style in "Chaos Slinger" is both elegant and evocative. Each sentence is crafted with care, drawing readers into a world that brims with vibrant imagery and palpable emotions. The author's ability to balance description and action creates a harmonious reading experience, allowing readers to visualize the enchanting landscapes and thrilling encounters. With a deft touch, the author weaves a narrative that dances between light and dark, showcasing their mastery of the written word.
Characters:
The characters in "Chaos Slinger" are a captivating ensemble, each with their own unique voice and motivations. The protagonist is a compelling
Second LawRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style : The moment I opened the first chapter and saw the "Note on language", I felt as if the author was overdoing it. It is a serialized web fiction on RR, not a work of Tolkien. After reading through four chapters, I can say for certain that the author is not overdoing it. He has set out to build a rich and epic world, and has done so with intricacy and care, and the style of writing and the tone of narrations heavily compliments the feeling of otherworldly storytelling. I don't know how else to explain it, but when the story is being narrated, the dialogues, the thoughts, everything flows in a way that immerses the reader into a different world with its own customs, history and society. In short, the style is appropriate for the story and excellent in quality.
Story : I kind of crossed the boundary into the story in the previous point, so I'll continue from there. As I had said, the author has taken on the ambitious task of creating a world with its own customs, history, society, and even geography. And over the 4 long chapters (5000+ words each), he has made excellent progress with worldbuilding, all the while advancing a central storyline that could somehow be described as coming of age of our MC, a blessed hunter who has not been able to do anything remarkable and is only known as the son of his father. Over the passage of the four chapters, we see the death of a Bluehands trader, which sets a series of events in motion that makes us familiar with the socio-political environment of the region, including the alliances and the unfriendly tribes. From there, we get to meet the character's love interest and parents and get sucked into an adventure as the MC joins a party that sets out to investigate this mysterious death. 20,000 words is a lot to set up a premise, but with the grand scale on which this book is written, that is what has happened.
Grammar : The spelling and grammar are largely flawless, my only gripe is that the punctuation on some of the longer se
keeganashleyliveRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story has epic vibes---as in, it feels like it and its world are set on a larger scale. The language is sweeping and grand with flowing sentences that really give you the feel of the fantasy genre. Anyone who can appreciate that type of writing will be very much at home here. The story is epic too---the characters are larger-than-life and you get kind of swept in and want to follow along the journey with them. …Also, I don’t know why I want to mention it here, but the chapter headings are very appealing to the eye---looking more like the start of a chapter in a book. I think it really added a certain, tangible something to how the tale comes off.
There were no glaring grammatical errors or anything that interrupted the reading experience. In fact, it is extremely noticeable that the author took great care with this work to make sure it was very polished up before posting. As a reader, I definitely appreciate that.
I would highly recommend this work. I think it’s going in a really great direction. If you’re a fan of fantasy (especially fantasy-style writing) with a few very original mixed-in elements, I’d say slow down and park your horse right here. ;P
P.S. The chapters are long and meaty (lots of substance). Definately a plus if you're a binge reader!
saba_86Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
"Daug'makar" and "makar'osa" are fantastic terms. The idea of a "farsense" that's like an extended sense of touch is unique and visually interesting. Describing it as "cheating reality" is a brilliant, relatable way to put it. The mechanics feel consistent and have clear costs and limitations (needing training, being disorienting), which prevents it from being an easy solution to every problem.
Deros is a Great Lens He's the perfect protagonist for this world. He's curious, a bit cynical, grounded, and his background as a stargazer-turned-warrior gives him a unique skillset. His internal voice is strong—the bit about being "37 or 42" is a wonderful character detail. He feels real.
You spend a long time on the moons and Deros's backstory before the inciting incident (the dust/rider). While it's all beautifully written and informative, a modern reader's attention might wander. The action doesn't really kick in until about halfway through. Consider tightening the first few pages, maybe weaving more of his backstory in after the mystery of the rider is introduced.
The exchange with Telalo is fine, it does its job. But it feels a bit... functional. Telalo's "sleepy" character is cool, but his dialogue doesn't quite have a unique rhythm yet. Compare it to the vibrant, personality-filled interaction Deros has with Enseres (which is perfect). Injecting a bit more of that unique character voice into the human dialogue would make it sparkle.