Brightstar: The Rising Superhero

Self-Published

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Description

Kenn has powers, it's not a weird ability to have in this world, rare, yes, but not impossible. Superheroes exist in this world. So how about he gave it a go? Helping people doesn't sound so bad. However, the thing that may hold him back is his power because at best, it's mediocre, but in truth is nothing more than a party trick. What is his power? Well... If I told you everything now, it wouldn't be a story, is it?

I'll try to post weekly.

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Status
Completed
Year
2021
Author
MrZombie

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Rating
2.9/ 5.0
Followers
36
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16,323

Chapters(28 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Purple Perplexing PineapplesRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Good enough read. Some weird grammar issues like being in past tense when talking about characters ("he was called Brightstar") as well as some other stuff but not bad enough to take me out of it.
    It's very short and very fast. A lot of stuff remains unexplained and under explored which you might be able to say is the intention but it would really just make for a more enjoyable read. The main character's powers are really not very clear even at the end. Seems like it kinda evolves? And he can use it to become a little stronger and incredibly fast but only if he's angry?
    A lot of things were very rushed. Still it kept my attention, it had a good enough plot line and made enough sense to be able to read. Not bad.