Brightblade's Tale : Story of Timothy the Kind Hearted Prince

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Timothy Brightblade, the eldest descendant of the Brightblade Family who managed to claim a city with their military power and defend it from all the advances of the neighboring city, is just starting his journey as a weapon master. he is known as the Kindest Crown Prince of the Brightblade Family for his merciful conduct and forgiving act.he also actively avoids unnecessary battles and is eager to have friends. the problem is, he is bad at talking.what will someone who is destined to be the strongest do when his peace-loving attitude is ruined by his own bad social skills?**************************************************

release every day from monday to friday! and with new Cover !! also new Title !!Happy New Year and Happy Holiday!

this work is assisted by AI, please kindly inform me if you find any misplaced words.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Carpet Rider

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 6
Views: 6,615

Reviews

No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!

Community Reviews(2)

Edge ValmondRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Story:
The main is someone who is more struggling to communicate with others from what I can gather. This taking place in a school setting, and as it goes along you will be more captivated by how the protagonist interacts with others. The strong suit of it is the world building, no doubt about it. The image it gives is clear as well.
Style:
I do not grade style, but it can come off sorta monotonous. This is my take on it, someone might think differently. Which is fair.
Grammar:
Multiple basic issues, and it is just simple ones. I highly recommend going through, and doing proper capitalizations. I think that is it really, it doesn't detract but it is really noticeable.
Characters:
From a protagonist that is more relatable, to those around them. The story really does well to have these characters play into it. And this is steadily shown along the way.
Overall:
It is a good story, but has some issues such as the grammar. And the other reason I had to rate it across the board as I did, is because the story struggles in bringing itself to life. It has potential, and I clearly see this. However, there does need to be more to really grab the attention. The way it is written for one, while it gets across the idea. It does not bring a good spark.
Anyway, I can recommend the story. It has some minor issues I will say.
G.A. RashRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This story is a fun read. The MC struggles to speak with just about anyone. This is not always shown well but once you know this, it stops being an issue.
The power growth for the MC feels fast but the author is jumping through the story's timeline quickly so it explains how he is getting stronger in such a short time. You get the feeling that the author is building something big.
The Chapters are shorter than I am used to but it doesn't take away from the story. The grammar however could use an edit. there are places where the character names are swapped around. It does make it a little hard to read at times. The Speech being broken over different lines also takes time to get used to.
Overall I do feel this story has great potential and will be adding it to my read list.