Bone Sage

Self-Published

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Description

Melton was a young man from a middle class family living a fairly decent life. As much as he was concerned there was no issue or worry in his world until he started feeling ill. It turned out that not only did he get a terminal disease, but the disease he got was acompletely new type of illness that degrades your bones and slowly kills you. But upon his death he was( forcibly?) reincarnated and given a chance and a task he has to fulfill with a new crew of exceptionally weird people. How will his adventure go?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
KICHIRO FURUTA

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYMALE LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATIONPROGRESSION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.6/ 5.0
Followers
15
Views
6,693

Chapters(21 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • kafiragaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    my balls itch so god damn hard, i had to dip them in sulphuric acid to kill the itch.  10/10 would read again. i mean this was literally made by mutahar 2.0 what else do you people want. filler for the review limit baybeeee initiated now and this should do it
  • ShyBoyRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    The prologue made me unwilling to continue for a number of reasons:
    1. Even after the remake and an editor spending time on it, it STILL has problems. I'm worried about NON-remade chapters now.
    2. Grammar and spelling. Example from the second or third paragraph: "private karate lessions. I menaged to reach brown belt". If those were the only ones, I'd live.
    3. Punctuation: missing dots, spaces before commas.
    4. First four paragraphs are told as if the MC narrates, that is in the first person. Then, from the next paragraph onward the narration is... in the third person. Why? Because!
    5. Nothing about MC interests me. If that's the prologue, why not summarize it? Why not begin the story in the new world? I see nothing of interest in the prologue. Literally nothing.
    6. The isekai-pitch and the "comedy" and the dialogue there. SO. WOODEN!
    Good luck with the writing. Since the prologue (even remade) discouraged me I'll be putting this down for other things I read/follow.