Bloody Orphan
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
After dying an ignoble death our nameless protagonist is reborn into a world of magic and violence.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- E. Anderson
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 22
- Views
- 23,650
Chapters(46 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- ThragnarRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I give this story 5 stars for fun. The main character isn't whiny or angsty, even with sucky life he was born into. His two best friends actually have their own personalitys, backstorys, and bring something too the table in equal measure too the mc unlike lots of other story's.
Constructive criticism wise- The pacing really needs to slow down(more towards the end of the first book), the world and other characters need more fleshing out(again more towards the end of the first).
The pace at the begging of the story was just right and should have been kept as you fleshed everything else out along the way.
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