Blooded Reborn
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Alex Jensen has lived a shit life. Abused by his mother and his ex-wife, he is trying to pick up the pieces and live in solitude to heal. that is until he is murdered in the street by the very woman he just got free of. Given a second life he wakes up in the body of a six year old boy named Xane. Alone in the mountains, using the skills given to him by the goddess along with early access to the system. Can Alex live the peaceful life of solitude he once sought or will he be caught up in the events of the new land he finds him self in.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- Shatterspell
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 71
- Views
- 27,165
Chapters(49 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Peter WilderbeekRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Overall a good read, a few misspelled words in the early chapters and occasional wrong words, but that seems to improve as the writing progresses. The characters are likeable, a couple of logical gaps, again mainly early. I like where the story appears to be headed. Keep up the effort.
- zeWodanRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5I do enjoy these sorts of stories so I might be a bit biased, but this one is solid. Doesn't really try anything new, but hey it it works why change it.
I do have some personal nitpicks.
While I do like his fear of women. He gets over it way too fast. I know there are reasons. It was the main thing that made the MC stand out.
MC chose crafting as a blessing, but he has neither the magic nor the tools to make those. Like the hellcat pants. To prepare the hide and then make pants aint easy. So either more research or more magic would be appreciated.
MC is not even a year in the world and he's already stronger then average law enforcer. If the story goes long enough and MC continues to grow this will create power disparities that are incongruous with how humans operate. So I would keep that in mind.
Overall I like this story and am looking forward to its unfolding.