Blood and Honor

Self-Published

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Description

Fate, such a small word with so much meaning. Also the name of one of the newest MMORPG with a Player base of 3 Million and growing. Since the introduction of the Visor and FIVR capsules people have been earning a steady income from working online in MMORPGs or various other online ventures. With a growing population around the world the masses needed another place to enjoy themselves and work.

Your Fate is your hands. You decide what you want to be. A stalwart Paladin in service to a noble cause, a Warlock making Pacts with Devils and Demons, a Jewelcrafter that makes the best gems and jewelry in the world of Ithea, or a simple inn keeper the choice is yours.

That's what the Devs described and that is what they delivered with the game. For Kevin AKA Jacob Longstrider, it was a chance to turn his life around. Kevin had felt his whole life that Fate had laughed at him and spurned him, now he is going to learn that when Fate smiles on him, it's not much better.Note* I do not own the Pic, I did not create it. All credit of the PIC/Art goes to the original creatorNote* Rewrites are coming starting 08-March-2021Note* This story will contain profanity, violence, cursing, sexual content, offensive language, jokes about fantasy ethnic groups (People that aren't real in other words), etc... So if you are easily offended, perhaps you should not read this story.

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Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
BloodneverLies

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYADVENTUREMAGICTRAGEDYDRAMASUPERNATURALGRIMDARKMYTHOSCULTIVATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
2
Views
4,059

Chapters(341 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • snorinRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a great book if you like the vrmmo genre.
    The style and story were pretty basic, but one can argue that you don't need a complex story for a great book.
    The gramar, though choppy, is easy to read, and pretty descriptive.
    In my opinion the characters were the best part, it felt as if I could hold a conversation with them.
  • JacksaunRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Really good story, a few grammar issues here and there, plus a few times where other words may be better suited to the sentence, but that is LITERALLY my only complaint. Everything else is great, there IS A POTENTIAL HAREM IN THE MAKING but it is well fleshed out with the harem having great charcaters who are interesting and funny, but still not annoying (very hard to do my friend). But yeah, you wont regret reading this (unless you hate violence, comedy, and/or video games)
  • RazinalRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Very Good combination of Base building and Battle Scenes not found easily elsewhere in this (Virtual Realiy) genre.👍😍
  • WarsteelRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Excellent writing, good pace for the story, and very good output of chapters. The double drops of chapters are appreciated been on this site for awhile and this is the only thing I have felt like writing a review for the author deserves it. There is some fine tuning such as spelling mistakes but those aren't very often and are usually caught fairly quickly. Author if you read this keep up the good work and keep doing you and like I said the double chapters are appreciated makes waiting for the next one's a bit easier
  • monoliithRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It's a very good VRMMO story. Where the game seems to be genuinely balanced, the politicing doesn't make me wanna beat my face with a hammer, the harem isn't boring, the MC has emotions and personality (even if i dont like him all the time), the world is super interesting, the "God Drama" every story has is NOT STEREOTYPICALLY 'evil god of light' !! Which makes it so much more interesting!
  • CalaventeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    All is very good (5stars) but two "3-4 stars".
    -there is an unique spelling.. I wouldn't really say spelling mistakes as they are mostly consistant... like "wisdem" .. :D
    -the writing style sometimes seems close to an oral style, especially when describing actions.
    otherwise the premises are interesting and while the characters are not developped much at the moment (chapter 8), we see a little bit of depth that is growing.
    anyway: an interesting read.
  • JayQueRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    First up: Cons
    - Needs an editor, or someone to read and correct spelling or incorrect words. Nearly every single chapter will have a couple larger confusions. For example, please stop using do when you should be using due. Lot of the mistakes are the wrong word being used because it sounds the same.
    -Story is a little cliche and tropey. Harem and smut becomes large part of story.
    Pros:
    Interesting content
    Beginning of story is super engaging
    Spoiler tags used to hide gratuitous numbers leaving story east to read for those not interested in cold logic numbers.
  • Logic LinquistRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I just finished reading chapter 47.  I am, so far, enjoying the pace of the story, the depth of the plot, and the well planned connectivity of each character's/faction's relationship(s) to everyone else.  The only major criticism I have is that whatever tool the author is using to review each chapter for misspellings and grammatical errors is still not catching a not insignificant amount of errors (ex. homophones, missing punctuation, spelling continuity of character names, etc.).  I recommend the author have an unbiased human proof reader meticulously go through every chapter in search of the aforementioned errors that were missed by the author's spell check tool.
  • AtroRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    I found the basic idea of this story appealing but the writing hurts it at almost every opportunity. The story it seeks to tell seems like it could be fun and touch successfully on a lot of different points, litrpg, faction building, lore and action. Possiblely even more depending on how the author took it. However I found myself having to work to read this and try to enjoy
    The grammar has issues, constantly.
    The litrpg tag isn't really appropriate most of the time, there are boxes and stats, but they don't really matter or get used. And the writer consistently ignores their own setting rules if they're inconvenient.
    The NPC's and the treatment thereof seems to ping pong back and forth between virtual people with their own hopes and dreams, and something just a step above a bot with a set of wrote lines to respond to most situations.
    The author seems to be trying to blend realistic combat descriptions with using set skills and abilities. But the way it ends up blending removes the advantages of either.
    All in all, while I like a lot of the ideas the author has, their telling of the tale is too much of an issue for me to keep going. I think there could be a good tale here, but it'll take a lot more rewriting and work.
  • endoriaRoyal Road
    ★ 1.0
    While the story might be interesting, the spelling mistakes, grammar errors and flaws in the game mechanic are just too much.
    I have the feeling the authors did not flesh out the game system in advance and the stupid premise (obviously taken from asian vritual reality novels) with guilds making money from games bla bla bla, the whole shebang, it is just plain annoying.