Bleach: Innate Control

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Description

A story about a guy trying to live through all the chaos in the world of Bleach. MC's power is the control of reishi. No Harem.

P.S. I've also posted this on Webnovel and ScribbleHub under the same name.

P.P.S. I've got a Patreon under the name Red Roman if you feel like supporting my work. I'll try to post a few chapters ahead on the page. I've also got a Paypal, if you want to make a one-off donation.

Links:patreon.com/user?u=87624621;https://paypal.me/OfficialRedRoman?country.x=ZA&locale.x=en_US

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Red Roman

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 102
Views: 38,672

Chapters(22 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

Scrund3rRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
While I'm not the biggest fan of time-skips and reincarnations into fictional worlds, this story drew me in. Overall, the grammar is good, the story is well-written, and the powers are interesting. Although it requires some prior knowledge of Bleach, the premise is really good, and there's a lot that can be accomplished with the MC's power. I hope this story continues since it leaves me wanting more.
IphigelinaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I'm very Lucky to have found this Fic...I'm also very sad to see that it's probably dead in the water so to say.
I had a great time reading it. The plot of the story is well done and sufficiently engaging. We're back enough in the past to see some part of the History of Bleach that aren't often developped . And what we can see is interesting.
The MC is very well explored and there was a lot of thoughts involved in the growth of the guy. It felt like a big power up, but in a relatively believable way. We're already at a very respectable Captain level . And it didn't felt very hard to come here. There is some Trauma because which MC doesn't have TRAUMA TM on his dance card ?, but it didn't feel too arduous.
The canon characters were well portrayed but not the focus of the fic. Not much in the sense of developped oc though, which given we are way in the past, should probably be there.
Unohana is still terrifying u.u.
All in all this was delicious, with great potential.
Even dead, it's worth a read.
There truly isn't enough good Bleach fic around T.T. This is a great one !
SinseenRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story is good for the amount of content it currently has but it lacks some details. The story seems to focus mostly on the character and by that I mean it doesn't describe the surrounding in great detail it just gives the basic description like a room is a room( if it does go into more detail I have forgotten and for that I am sorry) it doesn't explain where his room is and the surrounding environment which isn't to important but the lack of details prevent a clear picture from being drawn. That is unless you are very familiar with the original work and can find those details yourself and figure out where he currently is. It also has a bit of a problem in pacing but this is just my opinion, the issue to which I am referring to is the time skips it does not stay at a fixed point long enough to show his interactions with his surroundings and the people in them. That is currently all I have to say and I will make changes to this review when possible as I continue to read this story. Please take this with a grain of salt for I am not a professional reviewer and as such I could have missed many important details that are within this story.