Black Titan

Self-Published

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Description

Renya, a veteran of the virtual reality game [Alt Online], is now being threatened by one of the largest Alliances in the game, the [Red Sun Alliance]. They have come to take his city; the city that he put blood, sweat, and tears into. He prepares for battle, summoning his forces, and as he and the [Red Sun Alliance] are about to begin their fight, an emergency maintenance occurs. Finding himself back inside the city, he quickly finds out that things have taken a twist. His city that was once filled with lifeless NPC's is now full of life, and has been brought to a new world. Watch Reyna as he tries to find his way in this new reality he has found himself in, and as he creates his own legend. Synopsis Credit to: Leafyeyes417

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Casul_Reader

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,105
Views: 483,529

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Community Reviews(10)

Ssjn4vegaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i think this a good story being told decently well. I specially like that the author focuses more on personal interactions rather than fighting.
AzkalRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
My only regret is that chapters cant be posted more often, but that is beyond the author's control. I WANT MORE!
poiupRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I am loving this story nuff said just wish there was more :(
foufouu1Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
hhhhhhhhh reaaaaaaaaaaly ??????? you emitate overlord ! well good job for the settings for now ...
tarobobaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
First, I love Overlord, there are large shoes to fill if the story is taking inspiration from there, but I don’t expect the story to. I love like the setting and the Overlord vibe was enough to draw me in.
However,10 Chapters in, I just can’t get over how BORING, the dialogue, and interactions are. It feels like reading an FAQ page. Ask question, Answer. Sentences don’t flow well. I love what you are trying to build, so I really don’t want it to fail.
There is also a dissonance to the characters. For a city creator, his subordinates don’t feel like they respect their lord. I get the author is trying to create genuine camaraderie between master and subordinates, but its poorly executed. They pity him or humor his whims instead of respecting his wishes.
Author, please see some other fiction such a Forgotten Conqueror or Savage Divinity and try to emulate how they build characters and have dialogue. If done right, this already has the makings of a great story.
Also, YOU JUST FOUND YOURSELF IN A COMPLETELY NEW WORLD!!! HAVE SOME SENSE OF URGENCY!
satsehRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
First few chapters looks interesting, too early to give fair and full(er) review
AnikanRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story is very good, especially the fact that it is similar to overlord, but is not dark .
However I felt that the character does not make enough use of his resources, and is just a pawn being led around.
Also, the intervening side characters just pop on and out of the story, they don't have enough background and feel bland, even his sentinels his op assistants don't have enough description or character building, and are more of a stop gap measure for plot holes and inconsistencies.
While I enjoyed the story based on overlord and the characters OPness it can be improved a lot more.
Gamer4LifeRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
It is very clear this is inspired by Overlord but that's okay just over do it. This is still a pretty good read just keep on developing it, just no Plagiarism okay. Seriously if a yandere girl appears with an octopus soldier guy, I'm gonna kick your ass.
Ryhean ChronRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Interesting story, definitely got me going.
IgfryRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Well, it's not bad and really reminds which is great.
I didn't like the way dialogue is written like a play or the fact that the MC is such a terrible roleplayer.
Come on, man! Ham it up! Don't try to be like Momonga - BE MOMONGA! You're not even trying and the side characters act too much like modern people when they're not. They don't have the experience the MC or the audience has so why do they act like they do?