Black Sheep [dropped]
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
It was bad enough living in a cold mechanical world. It was even worse when he was exiled. Follow the man, marked for his crimes, and damned to eternal torment as he tries to find a place where he can belong.
* This is my first work. I've read stories on here for years and was finally inspired to contribute some content.
* Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. I think I have a neat idea and could use your help to turn it into a fun read.
* The RPG starts on chapter 8 so feel free to skip ahead if that's what you're here for.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- SmokeyBear
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 33
- Views
- 41,847
Chapters(31 total)
- New version is comingJun 28, 2019
- 26 - A Night on the TownMar 4, 2018
- 25 - PoisonFeb 28, 2018
- 24 - ContactFeb 17, 2018
- 23 - TrespassersFeb 13, 2018
- Bonus - Missing info from CH-22Feb 11, 2018
- 22 - AllocationFeb 11, 2018
- 21 - HunterFeb 10, 2018
- 20 - PreparationsFeb 10, 2018
- 19 - HistoryFeb 1, 2018
- 18 - AloneJan 28, 2018
- 17 - SpellCraftJan 26, 2018
- 16 - ReturnJan 25, 2018
- 15 - ForestJan 24, 2018
- 14 - manifestationJan 22, 2018
- 13 - ChallengeJan 21, 2018
- 12 - StatusJan 21, 2018
- Bonus Scene - PereJan 20, 2018
- Interlude - Builder II (Clint)Jan 19, 2018
- Interlude - Farmer II (Beth)Jan 19, 2018
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Community Reviews(3)
- gnarlytreemanRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Provided the writer continues the story this story has massive potential. I enjoyed what i read.
- Sanguine RayzelRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5As of chapter 26 the story is progressing well with only very minor grammical errors every now and again. the main character and his tribe are entertaining and relatable in a strange way. I cannot recomend this enough.
- zephRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Really great story! The style and immersive detail are really great, and the grammer is excellent. The amount of world building before the story really began caused there to be a slow start, and made for a couple of choppy transitions between chapters, but it also did a really good job of establishing the unique world and will probably be essential to understanding the plot later.
When the story does really start though it gets really good fast, so far its a great story. I'm really loving the interesting and somewhat new way of showcasing Litrpg.