Black Blood (Dropped...)

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The multiverse is a big place, and it is also constantly in flux. As such sometimes mistakes occur, impossibilities that should have never come into existence. An aspect of corruption born naturally of a mortal and a divine, a Void that is a singularity instead of a duality, a being that came to be before existence ever was, a forgotten that is not damned, the possibilities are infinite and limitless, and thus so are the possible mistakes in this grand multiverse. But are not mistakes more entertaining to watch? When being reincarnated there are some things that you just cant control. Losing most of your memories is not a great start. Pissing off your patron goddess is not a good follow up. Rounding that out with reincarnating as something not exactly… human… Needless to say this guy is in for an interesting life. Fans of B.B : Check out bonus content chapters by becoming my patron!!! Support me on my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/user?u=3147331&ty=h [{(Note, this story contains: torture, gore, violence, sexual content, and other mature stuff. read at your own risk.)}]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: AaronDragon

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 910
Views: 665,645

Chapters(59 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

AaronDragonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
it is perfect in every way……………………………………………………………….
but for real, this is going to be less edited (what passes for editing in my works so far) than i'd want, but now recruiting editors. YAAAAY!!! i am going for a more fun centralized feel to it with first person POV’s and a set main character. many will like this more than F.F.G and others will not……………………. over all i just want you to read the thing and decide for yourself………………………… and most likely cause the story to lose some stars from reviews like is fated to occur………………………….
*sigh*
Author OUT!!!!
Galaxyjumper16Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I LOVE YOUR STORY, PLEASE never drop this. I love the characters, I love the story, and most of all I love the universe that you have created. It’s so complex and so comprehensive that even if you gave me another HUNDRED hints I couldn’t guess at what is happening, the way you unravel your story is so unique and amazing that I have never seen it before and don’t think I will ever again. Keep up the good work, I’m anxious to get more sweet sweet vampire crack!
h2h1zRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great story with a lovable, if amazingly dark, MC. It has a few misplaced words like "sweet" when it meant sweat but nothing my agile average sized can't handle after reading google translated LMS *shudder*. Keep up the good work and just know haters gonna hate but writer gotta write (OR ELSE.....).
hayazi96Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Fuck. SO, I done the MOST IDIOTIC thing I EVER COULD...
I READ A SERIES THAT WAS DROPPED, AFTER THE FACT IT WAS DROPPED 24 HRS PRIOR.
DON'T READ IT YOU POOR BASTARDS!!! DON'T BECOME LIKE ME!!! CRAVING MORE!!!! NEVER TO RECIEVE.... (probably, afterall, this author has to many stories)
SO OVERALL...
It's all adictive, (not) entirely original, but once again, ADDICTIVE. SIMPLE? GET MY POINT.
meddler88Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Just found this story from the Scribes of Darkness forum page. I love dark fantasy and this story scratches that it so i recommend it and other dark fantasy to everyone.
http://royalroadl.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=84371
truegrave34Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Love that shit so amazing makes me laugh a lot it's well written to. To those who also hat on this story for some messed up reason or another don't tear it down and make the author sad cuz there are those who enjoy it
darthrussianRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Well, like in the title.
The beginning was funny original and promising.
Now the MC is a narcisitic asshole.
This is an empoverment story and everything falls to him with not much resistance.
I honestly have seen to many of those, so.... Dunno.
Let's see in the future.
denfacRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story has an interesting theme, a good beggining, and until chapter7 or 8 i guess the story was interesting, after that the story starts getting too messed, characters change personality, gets less likeable, and the story starts getting messed up and inconsistent, the MC is not likeable at all, and i am not saiyng this because of his sadistic personality, but because he is dumb, is controversial in his actions and has no real purpose to everything he does. The writing is bad, the emotions of the characters feels fake and forced, the way things go his way also feels forced, the way people talk and act feels unrealistic, even in a fantasy world the way people talk and think shoulnd't be that unrealistic, and the plot apart from the first chapter is very boring, it's more of a harem making story of a dumb kid who only wants to play around in a world where he can do anything he wants.
ZeijiRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
This story has a really good start as it fully embraces the ridiculousness of the main character's cuteness/charm power. However, as the plot transitions to a power trip fantasy where the protagonist seems to vie for world domination and divinity, the poor character development, minimalist character dynamics and nonexistent world building results in a product that is neither funny nor gratifying.
Alt makes no real progress on any of his goals and solves problems using unsophisticated methods. Many of his plans are mentioned but are quickly forgotten by the next chapter including subverting the population with addictive drugs, becoming recognized as a child genius-inventor and cultivating a group of believers. As an immortal or near immortal he could have used any of these in an extended plot on those that attacked his family but instead he chose brute force and intimidation like a xian xia character.
Alt lacks a foil to make him really stand out as the protagonist. Following the kidnapping arc, the characters nearest to him are made into unquestioning followers without wills of their own. This is great for an ironfisted overlord but the author’s choice to give them all POV chapters expressing inner thoughts makes for characters that are neither here nor there. They are (not) important characters that are (not) very special. The queen or Liz could also have served as interesting counterparts to Alt’s quirkiness but their interactions with him, learning combat and alchemy respectively, was told and not shown.
The final straw was the lack of a coherent world. The author mentions in passing that the world is full of monsters, men, gods, and enemies abound looking to overthrow the queen. However, despite having access to the royal vampiric library and agents in shadowy organizations and infiltrating foreign governments Alt knows nothing beyond his immediate vision. Consider the following excerpts from Chapter 21.
I had first thought (Fera) meant she had found a FEW new r
KandoralRoyal Road
★ 1.0
Style: Not much stlye there to see. The "Author" posts more unrelated stuff than he/she posts chapters
Story: Great at the beginning, is deteriorating pretty fast. Now i would say it is at a point where you can say "nah, nothing good again, useless things again"
Grammar: There are many mistakes (There, Their, They're for example)
Character: At first the Author made good character descriptions, fully developing them, but as you read the chapters the characters are all only shallow now and have no meaning.
What drives one crazy is that the "Author" posts more useless, unrelated stuff than he posts chapters. Seriously, the people want to read the story not your fucking "Go people and make theories (again)" Stuff. If we want to make theories we can make our own stories, but we want the story
Because of these things i can't give more than 1 star