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Description
Waking up with a searing headache, in a freezing and unfamiliar forest, with no memory of how He got there. He'll try to find a way out before the night catches up with him.
NOTE: This story is forRoyal Road Writathonand it is aRough Draft!I appreciate all feedback, whether it be for typos, plot, pacing, and so forth.
The average chapter length is 2000 words.Release one chapter daily (Hopefully) until Writathon is over, after that 3 times a week (Maybe).
[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
Information
- Status
- Cancelled
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Valhoon
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 31
- Views
- 18,848
Chapters(38 total)
- Chapter 18 - Shredder's mushy brain PlanNov 28, 2022
- Chapter 17 - Unconscious Crush?Nov 27, 2022
- Chapter 16 - Fear Only Sees The MomentNov 26, 2022
- Chapter 15 - Aiming HigherNov 25, 2022
- Chapter 14 - Too ObviousNov 24, 2022
- Chapter 13 - No DissatisfactionNov 23, 2022
- Chapter 12 - Ogling Her SveltNov 22, 2022
- Chapter 11 - Cards Almost FoldedNov 20, 2022
- Chapter 10Nov 15, 2022
- Chapter 9Nov 14, 2022
- Chapter 8Nov 14, 2022
- Chapter 7Nov 14, 2022
- Chapter 6Nov 13, 2022
- Chapter 5Nov 12, 2022
- Chapter 4Nov 11, 2022
- Chapter 3Nov 7, 2022
- Chapter 2Nov 5, 2022
- Chapter 1Nov 4, 2022
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Community Reviews(2)
- Eudaim0niaRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This is an unexpectedly good story about a man thrown into a world of monsters and powers. Vic has to make use of his intellect and blessing to the fullest before he gets torn by Shredders.
The world is merciless and mysterious, the main character has to gain information when it's expected of him to know it already. Vic often has to guess the truth and attempt to "act natural".
It's a real page flipper, the style is very fluid, its easy to read and you never get bored with the way the story is presented thanks to how the narration style changes depending on the POV. The pacing may be slow at the beggining, but it gets faster later.
The characters are very well-written with their little quirks and different approaches to the advercities life throws at them. The interactions between certain two specific characters are incredible by themselves, and the fact that it's probably not the first time this will happen in this fiction is nice
Vic's blessing is very interesting on its own. I do not want to spoil, but i feel like it will change things up drastically in the future chapters. - EmpireofTrustRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The story draws you in through how little the character knows.
As he learns more you learn it through his thoughts trying to process it whatever state he is in.
There are some small weird word choices but I am not sure yet if it is the characters issues or a cultural tic or even a tic of the character but as this is a draft it might change before you read it.
It is fairly early in the story as I write this review but I am looking forward to see where this story leads.