Beyond The Omniverse (DC)

Self-Published

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Description

This is the story of a man who is given a second chance at life. Reborn into one of the strongest universes and armed with an equally strong system to level the playing field. Will he succeed in this life where he once failed? Will he follow the light, the dark, or a mixture of both? What is in store for him in this new world? This is the journey of a man on a quest to live a fulfilled life.

PLEASE READ Author's ForewordI answer the most frequently asked questions in there. If you have other questions, DM or write a comment. I will do my best to respond.

DISCLAIMER:I don't own any characters besides my own. They all belong to their respective companies.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Legxndary

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 130
Views: 96,357

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Community Reviews(1)

Hussam_02Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This story is like most fan fictions on this site, it tends to focus more on the powers/systems than character-building. Don't get me wrong, the powers are very interesting but after a while, it feels like a notification you ignore once you see it again. Also, not a massive fan of how everything is happening when the MC isn't even a biological teenager yet. The plot is interesting and is not easily discernable, I just wished the characters were more fleshed out. The system is unique and I like how the MC doesn't automatically try to get the most OP items/powers.
What I would change/add:
.Fix up the grammar and spelling in some paragraphs
.Add more points of view and dialogues
.Have a slower rise to power
.Let the MC grow up physically to be at least a teen
.Look to other Fan Fics like Captain Westeros (All Characters have a unique personality)