Battlefield Restart (Original/Unedited)

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Description

After retiring from the battlefield, my life became empty and lifeless. The regrets of my past haunt me in my sleep. Then a change occurred, a King from another world summoned me to fight for his kingdom, but I died even before I could give him my answer. Now, after a fake God allowed me to reincarnate with my memories intact, into a world filled with magic and swords.

Information

Status: Cancelled
Year: 2017
Author: Love4NovelGuy

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 479
Views: 269,649

What readers say about Battlefield Restart (Original/Unedited)

“Beginning was awesome, and that should end story. But what if you want continue reading. You have mc so weak you fell pity for him and sadness. No op skill no past life experience nothing that help him. Only left hope that autor kill him painless. After 10…”
korlinkiRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“It's a good story, veey interesting, solid world building in my opinion anyway. Grammar needs work lots of miss spelling but easily understood and story flows well regardless.”
Nomad1791Royal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(8)

korlinkiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Beginning was awesome, and that should end story. But what if you want continue reading. You have mc so weak you fell pity for him and sadness. No op skill no past life experience nothing that help him. Only left hope that autor kill him painless. After 10 CH i can say Goodbye GL hf
Nomad1791Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's a good story, veey interesting, solid world building in my opinion anyway. Grammar needs work lots of miss spelling but easily understood and story flows well regardless.
kingsfunRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The world and story are fleshed out quite well and the reader isn’t overwhelmed with needless back-story or over dun world building.
The story follows a fairly original take on the taken to a fantasy world setup and the powers and usage are an interesting concept that has been explored well. I do find that many story’s tend to end up written into a corner with the MC getting to strong and the fantasy world turns into some cataclysmic nonsense but the author seems to be keeping it slightly slower passed for now.
Grammar is good and I can read and understand everything but there are some mistakes that even I notice but that is to be expected no one can write this much and catch everything.
The characters are interesting and besides a few spots where I was a little confused about the motivation till a little longer than I would have liked they are well executed. I do however feel that there may be too many to follow soon and that may take away from the readers’ ability to empathize with them.
All in all I like this story and will hopefully remember to keep up with it.
Thank you for sharing your work with us.
zmikezRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I'd like to start out by saying that I normally never do reviews, seeing as how a good number of them are fairly accurate. However, after reading to the current chapter and then reading the reviews, almost all of them made me facepalm. So far all I've seen is reviews from people who cant get past a measly 15 chapters (half of whats been put out) to even start being able to actually see what the story is about.
So as a reply to the other current reviews.
First is towards Forgiv3n324
Spoiler: Spoiler
This one isn't as bad as the others as he actually says he can't get past the child ark and that it's his own problem but for fairness sake I have to poke at it too.
It specifically said in chapter 3 it would affect growth. All gods, including the fake ones, grant said origin to their chosen. Regardless of type all can be used in the same way, differences between them are apparently on what concepts they can influence.
So you're upset about something not being a way that it was not made or even remotely explained to be that way. Thats like saying, "Oh, I have 100x exp gain and have killed nothing, why arent I max level yet?"
Return to chapter 3 and ctrl+f for growth, increased exp gain from litrpg type books are growth enhancers, hence the comparison is quite literally 1:1
Next, I guess, is korlinki. I'm kinda not sure why I bothered. The 30 minutes he spent skimming this story to give it a bad review. (Guessed his reading speed based on grammar)
Spoiler: Spoiler
Judging by his comments about how the character is and the chapter he said I can roughly guess where he has read up to. So the reply will be based on that
***You have mc so weak you fell pity for him and sadness.
So, a 5 year old being weak..... yeah..... not seeing a problem with that. Trying to avoid spoilers but lets just say that some of the best novels I've ever read. Like stellar transformations, I shall seal the heavens, True martial world, Martial world. A vast majority of novels that are not litRPG type
ProfGenkiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
GiVE ME MoRE!
I really like this and I hope you continue to write and finish this story, although I hope the ending is like 1000 chapters later or something because I'm just really enjoying this.
Keep it up
Forgiv3n324Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
What can I say? 14 chapters and the guy is still in the child phase ( It's a reincarnation story) and we have all read 100 reincarnation storys so we all know what the child phase is and when it gets dragggggggggged on well I stop reading because I gets dull fast because all the childhood phase is training phase the only kind of interesting training phase is the cruel kind where MC's family dies quick and cruelly and he is kidnapped and forced into some gruelling shit but when its just born into average loving family/noble family in this case kind of a mix and then just info dump after info dump after info dump well ... yea ... dull ...
Since I didnt get past the childhood phase I cant really say much about the plot because well its the childhood phase there is no plot that is shown
Character? A lot of cliches and over used types but their not bad just over used. The MC tho? He is a blit of a blurg? You can't really understand his character it has too many contradictions was 80 yrs old when he died and was an average soldier ( thought hinted otherwise?) who has a 6th sense for surivival and about it but when reborn gets told by the person who reincarnated him that he gets said gods unique power and will be the ONLY one to get said unique power so what does he do when he gets reincarated? tries to follow how others use magic and gets told he's bad at it... duh you have a UNIQUE type (till chapter 14 he still has nvr figured that out so ... )
Style? not bad grammar is good no real problems there
So my advise? If you can get through the childhood phase I think there is good potential to the story because the author obviously has a plan I just cant get through the childhood phase and thats my own personal problem don't let it influence you otherwise, other than that I think it would be a good read to pass the time.
joempireRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
First off. I'm reviewing this after 30 chapters. So far it has been a generic reincarnation/Chinese naval gazing story. Sadly it has no useful past life experiences outside of the "mature baby face".
Don't get me wrong. I enjoy the story. I won't stop reading it if you keep writing.
That said, the characters are kind of thrown in and then gone. They feel like pretty much just set pieces so far.
The greatest weakness is the pacing. A standard reincarnation that is too long winded to be completely enjoyable, Check. Young underpowered kid with over powered foreshadowing, Check. Kid sister with family/clan of naval gazing level uppers, check.
Its standard stuff. But please break it up a bit. We have the type of main character who never gives up. Great. Buuut. Suddenly after a 5 year trainijg skip the character makes tons of developments, weapons and crazy insights. Oh and his sister is suddenly a genius. Too much too fast.
You don't need training montages or anything, but the break throughs after a few hours of intense navel gazing is...generic and cheap. Another gun plus magic? Lazy.
My thoughts?
First. Make things happen naturally. Don't force god/messiah level stuff all at once.
Second. The kid seems completely oblivious to the world. He should be paying attention to his surroundings if he was this amazing soldier. The other perspectives help, but should be unnecessary.
Third. He is getting educated...but just in fighting. You mention about learning to read and basic math, but it's apparently not useful for this guy to make a plan outside of "git gud". Some wise old man he is. Sneak some of your world building in the schooling. The guy was a soldier, not a scientist, I get it. But that he has no ideas about the threats in the world, the politics, etc with no desire to learn...makes me wonder if magic baby hormones messed him up.
After all that bad juju, I still applaud your passion in writing and hope to see where this goes.
Love, a random reader.
wirzgeekRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
I'd like to start with stating that I like to stay objective in most reviews.
However, I despise almost all of your characters. Not in the "Oh he's a terrible person" way, but the "I would enjoy being able to torture that character to death" way. Not entirely sure why, but I fail to find anything I like about the characters.
Not really anything wrong with the story or style, not bad, not innovative, but my hatred for the characters(Although very likely irrational) just makes me view the story as worse than it likely is.
Added the following 4/17
First off, why does the MC want to be a butler in the first place? Why does everyone else assume that he wants to be a butler? Why are all the nobles arrogant pricks? Does the main character just go along with the last thing that someone said to him? Does he even plan for the future besides the vague "Imma be strong"? One would think that after an entire life, he would find value in planning, or at least have a spine and say no to people, or at least plot something to get his way.