Balance Breaker

Self-Published

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Description

In a world where skills are everything Cid is shackled with one that locks him out of obtaining others. Before he can come to terms with that fate he gets an ability blasted into him that allows him to gather skills like no other, and all it cost him is a grudge with the royal family, his freedom, and maybe his life if he's not careful.

Join Cidrakas Lasalis in a weak to OP story with high magic and a once in a generation romance. Contains graphic violence and mild profanity.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Frangit

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 7
Views: 7,990

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Kinja427Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This story is normally not something I would have read. However, I gave it a chance, and was glad I did. The fast pace after chapter 9,
After the jail break.
was like catnip. I couldn't put it down for too long (Even if I did play Half Life 2, Portal 1 and 2, and Left for Dead 2 between reading). It does have its flaws, but for a first work, very well done. I also left my thoughts chapter by chapter for the first half, so enjoy those if you want to see how I felt after each one.
Characters: probably the weakest point for me, with the amount of detail ranging quite wildly, some characters get a lot of description, allowing you to picture them in your head. Others, they get a sentence if they're lucky. That's why it gets 3 stars. When they're important characters, you get a lot of description. When they're less important, you and the author know that.
Grammar: There are a few spelling mistakes that I saw and pointed out, however Frangit did a great job in quickly fixing them. So for that, 4.5 stars.
Style: I like it. The world is well made and feels interesting. Shame most of the start kept the MC in a cathedral and prison cell. 5 stars
Story: Oh boy. The story started off really slow, like Slice of Life slow. But chapter 9 and onward feels like a runaway train in comparison. So for the first part, 3 stars. For chapters 10-27, 5 stars. Total score here, 4.5 stars.