Azura the Slayer

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A terrible demon was cast out from her universe by the supreme god. She got 3 wishes by the god for being cast out, but as she was being granted them, a situation arose and an error occurred. Her 2 wishes were granted but the third one was lost.

She was immediately transported to a different world in a different universe. But Azura being the girl she is, she will find a way to thrive.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Ar_Not_Nas

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WolfieRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Reviev based on first 18 chapters.
Disregarding the typography that gets all over the place should anyone change the font size, book itself has a few grammar errors, but it's readable (few like 1-4 per chapter, but chapters are short). There are use of english issues as well.
Plotwise ... it gets slightly worse ... for empires that are at constant war a few of their decisions are .... questionable at best. I disregard customs since it's the other world after all and it WOULD be strange if they behaved like us but in some cases natural selection-chan should do her job ...
Spoiler: Examples
Like having an imperial academy in a city few kilometers away from the border (country being the size of Europe) with .... 300! men worth border garnison. The city itself does not have ANY law enforcement forces at all (well besides a dragon but I sincerelly doubt it will patrol the streets and check if people are smuggling something in) sinse teachers of the academy have to fight the invaders ....
Or allowing one of 2 princes go alone to SUPER-DANGEROUS-MURDER FOREST ... so ... yeaaah ...
Or having border officers that will allow anything to pass as long it's not few thousand strong army. Because some documents ? meeh not needed, we are only at constant war ... every beggar on an unicorn for sure is other country's ambassador. That's a natural conclusion and said ambassador should be left unchecked.
The whole country cannot stop 1 dragon despite being 'at war' (what implies some army somewhere, could be abroad, but all of it?) with neighbours ... so if dragon is so unstoppable so that it goes into enemy capital like into his own garden and burns everything down and kills everyone ... why not send it to the enemy country in the first place :v ? (since apparently enemy dragon is ... somewhere so that one can fly though Europe sized country, destroy cities and kill all enemy capital inhabitants before another reacts ;v)
Another isue that may or may not be a problem soon is that there