Atone Online
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Description
In a fully immersive digital world where reputation is the most important stat of all, one lone prisoner fights to survive.
His identity has been stripped away. His body, like his reputation, lies in ruins. There can be no turning back for the lowly scrap of personaware known only as Shade. In a world where it's easier to be the bad guy, his path will be fraught with warriors, demons, and necromancers, all standing between him and the greatest prize of all…redemption.
Will Shade atone for his sins?Or will temptation win out over redemption, molding him into the greatest threat the ‘game’ has ever seen…
Atone Online is my WIP LitRPG novel, and the first book I have ever published directly to the web as a serial. I’ll be sharing the unedited story online as I write, before eventually having the whole book edited for publishing on Amazon. So in the meantime, this is your chance to log into the world of Atone Online for free.
Hope you enjoy.
©Aiden Steele
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Aiden Steel
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 82
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- 67,652
Chapters(52 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- MihosRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A good novel, the premise is pretty fresh not a lot of stuff like this is done, with decent(ish) world building.
Good grammar with only a few problems, good sentence structuring and decent descriptions.
Good characters, though I can't say much with how many chapters there are, I also love the fact that the mc is actually struggling and is not being op (yet). The mc and the other are all fairly likeable.
The only problems I had were with interludes as I just don't want to read them, but that is my own preference. Interludes are a great way to build the world and adding depth to characters.
Summary: A good novel that has a premise that is not used often, with good grammar and likeable characters. - AceRoyaltyRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Really liked the premiss of this story, but I simply can read no more.
The slow pace of disaapointment after disapointment, hurts this story's readability. The interludes are constant the MC is an idiot, and his situation never gets better.
Honestly it seems like the story, much like the main character's situation, keeps getting worse. Every light at that end of the tunnel dies with every new chapter.
Sorry for the flame- These are just things I wished I knew before sunk in so much time. - TheCatsMeowRoyal Road★ 0.5The plot moves slow af and the mc is so dumb I just couldn’t finish it.