Ascension: Rebirth of the Master [Tower LitRPG]

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Description

Ascend the Tower or fall into oblivion.

This is the message that humanity receives when mass amounts of people are suddenly transported to the Tower by a god-like, cruel entity known as the Administrator. Aided by gods from mythology, humanity tries its best to ascend the Tower.

In the end, however, humanity fails.

Kai is a grizzled veteran warrior who, in spite of all his struggles, all his fighting, and all his losses, fails to clear the Tower just like everyone else.

As humanity is wiped out, he is sent back in time.

This time, armed with knowledge and skills he could only dream of before, Kai gets ready to clear the Tower once and for all.

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Kronos_7Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    While there aren't a whole lot of chapters yet, this story looks really good! I'm immediately interested in the plot and characters and am excited to see how Kai's personality grows as he uses his expertise to navigate the tutorial and beyond. I'm also interested in the additional class that Kai will receive since he will really need to risk his life to get it.
    The story is very well written, with no grammar errors that I could see. The characters are believable and make smart, realistic decisions. I would like to see a bit more to differentiate the System text from the rest of the story, but it's not an actual issue if it remains as is. It could be something as simple as an extra line space, italicizing some words, changing the font (or even color), and I think that would help bring it all together.
    The one thing I noticed that confused me was that there seem to be edits made to the length of the first wave (from 5 to 10 years) that didn't get 100% cleaned up, but it's only in the first three chapters that mention it so it's not really a big deal either.
    Hope to see more of this soon!
  • NeslonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Was fun to read hope as more comes that the story will maintain it's high quality that it's had so far. Clear righting, reasonable characters with reasonable motivations a lot of the red flags that jump out at me in Isekai stories don't seem to be present here. Hoping it stays awesome.
  • jazjezRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I started this book, not expecting too much, but so far it hasnt dissapointed! It is fairly early days, but ive noticed no large problems with the writting style (using the wrong word, overly awkward interactions and the likes), seems to be well edited, MC is well written and coherent so far. Would definetely recommend!