AS LONG AS IT'S INTERESTING, ISN'T IT FINE TO LIVE AS A DUNGEON? (Hiatus)

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[This story is now in Hiatus and I dont know if I'll come back to work on it again.]

The story of a girl with a flare for creating a show that’s willing to let a lot of things slide so long as it’s interesting. She is summoned as the core of a newly birthed dungeon. With the power to create and destroy, what poor thing will her curiosity draw her to next? What interesting things will she show us?

Note: This is just something I'm doing in between doing things. Please expect shoddy quality, a poor updating schedule, and significant rewrites. Thanks.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: eta

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 478
Views: 180,281

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Community Reviews(4)

Aki-chiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
While i don't think this novel is bad, not at all, I can't help but think of how much better it could be, be it the update frequency, the speed in which the story develops, how to juggle between the many characters he flahses, it all could do with some more in depth grownth. Thing is, it's still an enjoyable novel to read, and just like me, the author seems more experienced in reading than writing his own novels. Kudos for the potential and good luck with any self imposed (or not) pressure. Do what ya feel is right.
HapeironRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like the Dungeon stories, so my assessment and the fact that this story is marked among my favorites, may not be impartial.
Of course I should clarify that this story is not focused in detail on the construction of Dungeon, and the story feels somewhat coarse at times, but it is still pleasant or at least it is for me.
If it is read without being too demanding, it can turn out to be a good reading, with some nice touches, without being exceptional. There are better stories, but I definitely do not think reading this story is a waste of time.
Definitely this story is at least a solid 3 or 3.5 stars so far. That is to say that in RoyalRoad where one can find from illegible stories to large hidden gems. This story is quite above average, I could even say it is a diamond in the rough. Although it needs a bit of polishing to be able to really shine in a dazzling way. In addition to requiring more chapters, along with proper development. It definitely has potential.
Considering that the Dungeon Stories I like. Also, that this story turned out to be a good read, I rate it with 4.5 stars. (I give a +1 star bonus, for my preferences and why this story pleases me)
TRNRLoganpokeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Simply put the biggest issue is the way the dialogue is written. It IS a personal preference but, I've NEVER seen another story this well written do it like this.
For reference:
It goes like this.
[Bob] Blah blah bob things.
Then it either gives the reply
[Joe] Blah blag Joe things.
OR internal thoughts WITHOUT ANYTHING SAYING THEY ARE.
I mean I'm only on Chapter 3 but i felt the need to rant.
Skeleton KingRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
There is basically no explanation on any thing. Powers appear out of nowhere. For example, we just learned she can summon creatures and now she can also modify them? A little kid can have lnowledge if they studied properly under a tutor or even by themselves if they are smart but the explanation given left a lot to be desired. Logic is the embodiment of mediocre. It is not bad enough to be unreadable but it is still frustratingly bad. It like you bought the cheapest thing you could buy which you knew was going to break in two days. The logic and realism have that exact same feel to them. The premise is interesting but it could require some polishing especially in the earlier chapters.
In short, nothing is given in detail. Important details are glossed over. Everything seems, hectic, busy, random. Logic is questionable.