Archangel
Self-Published
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Description
What happens when one of the purest angels of God, kills...?
Becca has a past that she just got to recoverShe has a secret that she's recalling litte by littleHer world and her beliefs are not what she thoughtAnd it's going to change the whole ballance of things
Even if it stains the whole reality in shades of gray
Updated every other Monday
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Bentancourt Alexsandher
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 17
- Views
- 9,376
Chapters(28 total)
- PROLOGUE VIII - And then I saw a beast emerging from the sea (Part three)Nov 22, 2021
- PROLOGUE VII - And then I saw a beast emerging from the sea (Part two)Nov 15, 2021
- PROLOGUE VI - And then I saw a beast emerging from the sea (Part One)Nov 8, 2021
- PROLOGUE V - As above, so belowNov 1, 2021
- PROLOGUE IV - Chasing ghostsOct 25, 2021
- PROLOGUE III - Facing off the crossroadOct 18, 2021
- PROLOGUE II - Deal with the devilOct 15, 2021
- PROLOGUE I - Knocking on hell's doorOct 13, 2021
Reviews
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Community Reviews(2)
- T.K._ParadoxRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This has the making of a very good book. Even thought it is early in devolpment I'd have to say that this story show promise, and makes me feel eager on what will happen next.
After all the base concept is intresting, the idea of angels being various shades of gray instead of being full of black and white to various shades of gray. I have a feeling once the author gets a few more chapters out he will see a large increase of fans of his work
Sincerely, T.K Paradox - WeavervaleRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0And by that I mean, okay this could go somewhere. I see this as a distinctly nice style of writing but it remains to be seen where the author goes with it.
No grammar issues that I could find although overall coat is a nice touch. I want a coat that is also overalls. Usually when I read some grammar issues they pull me out of a read, but this one is just fine. Keep it up.
Criticism: The cover is... well it's fine okay. The thing I'm lacking is a blurbity blurb with a release schedule. Could we get that much at least?
Style: 5/5 No blocking paragraphs so this didn't come across as a problem.
Story: 5/5 Again, there is a lot of promise of the premise and I don't know where this is going yet so, keep in mdin I'm going off the writers skills to convey this initial chapter here.
Character score 5/5: OKAY! This is good! I saw some good interactions here and the characters are less "show" more "tell" through their action, CLASSIC GOOD WRITING THERE. Keep that up please.
I always give this critique to my writing partner. The only problem I have with your story, besides the blurb... is that there isn't more!
Hit me up in a month and I'll update the review.