Another life another chance
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Description
A genius being is born again after being killed in an explosion. Feeling that this new life couldn't be any worser than the life before she accepts being reincarnated. But can she really lead a better life ?
I will upload 1 ch/week as minimum
I will hope for productive comments so that we can have a fun time making this story as good as possible.
If interested in being my editor (since english is my second language I do need one) please write me or post it in the comments
Love you all
Cat
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- CatKr
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 450
- Views
- 57,340
Chapters(29 total)
- Chapter 29Nov 6, 2018
- Chapter 28Sep 30, 2018
- Chapter 27Sep 23, 2018
- Chapter 26Sep 16, 2018
- Chapter 25Sep 9, 2018
- Chapter 24Sep 3, 2018
- Chapter 23Aug 26, 2018
- Chapter 22Aug 19, 2018
- Chapter 21Aug 12, 2018
- Chapter 20Aug 5, 2018
- Chapter 19Jul 28, 2018
- Chapter 18Jul 22, 2018
- Chapter 17Jul 15, 2018
- Chapter 16Jul 8, 2018
- Chapter 15Jul 1, 2018
- Chapter 14Jun 24, 2018
- Chapter 13Jun 17, 2018
- Chapter 12Jun 10, 2018
- Chapter 11Jun 3, 2018
- Chapter 10May 27, 2018
Reviews
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Community Reviews(6)
- SundjinRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Perhaps it's just my own preferences, but the first chapter having the MC bragging about how awesome they are (IQ of 278 etc) and how sad their life is before they are reincarnated grates me.
After this chapter that had me almost drop it right then it settles into a slow building story with plenty of memorable characters and a world that makes me want to know more about it.
Slow building story so far with plenty of potential for larger arcs down the line.
As of chapter 18 (as another review mentions chapter 55 and there are only 18 out currently I would assume this is a rewrite). Good grammar, or at least I noticed few errors.
Looking forward for more. - Void of the AbyssRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The grammar needs some work but I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes
- nadleehRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0the premise is great. The tangents and small chapter length can be annoying, but the frequent postings make up for that. The biggest problem is the formatting, its really distracting. the PR chapters are a bit better but the paragraphing is still absolutely horrendous.
love the story, but at this pacing the story is going to have to be 800+ chapters long for her to get to demi god level - ElyasRoyal Road★★★ 3.0I’ve read up to chapter 55 and so far there has been practically no progress in the main story, every time you think something might happen the author goes into a 4 chapter backstory on some character you don’t really care about.
I really think this novel would be really cool when the actual story starts but all these backstories are killing me. - NerodithRoyal Road★★★ 3.0It's been a while I've read this story so I'll write this review from what I remember.
Style and Grammar:
The writing style is very simple, but there are two things that irk me.
The author has this habit to start a new line pretty randomly. Sometimes, it's at the end of a sentence, sometimes at a comma, sometimes right in the middle of a sentence. Visually, I'm not going to lie, it's pretty pleasing. The paragraphs more or less have the same size, it looks like a poem. However, when you start reading, it becomes quickly frustrating. This stops the immersion and disrupt the read.
My second problem is the use of asterisks. Dear author, this is a novel, not a roleplay, you can't use asterisks to add an action to your story. Describe it. For example, instead of writing "Me ... Too ... " *sigh*, you can write "Me... too..." I sighed. You don't have to use long sentences. It's just a small detail, but it can be distracting.
Also, be careful of the layout and the font. It varies from one chapter to another. Once again, it's a small detail, but it can be fixed easily.
Then comes the grammar. It's not terrible, but it could be better. The first chapters were hard to read. Fortunately, most of them were corrected. Some chapters still need to be proofread, but otherwise, it's much more readable.
Story and Characters:
To be honest, I don't remember much about the plot. But it does tell one thing: there is nothing really memorable. While I had fun reading the story, this is not something that left me a big impression. It has yet to have a new turn of events that will make it shine.
The pace of the story is pretty slow. In 50+ chapters, not much happened. It didn't particulary bothered me, but at this pace, it's going to take a lot of chapters to truly develop the story.
The characters have interesting backgrounds, but they're hard to relate. Some of their actions lack logic and some developments seem forced. Nothing really bothering though. My main issue, however, is that I can' - amandantRoyal Road★★★ 3.0reading upto chapter 27 now i know what the other reviewer write about grammar, so the author manage to write except as aspect, and ceiling as sailing. At first i was blank, like huh? what did she look at? sailing? Need to meditate before manage to find out that author mean to say that MC look at ceiling. i do think author need a proofreader immediately. I can spot mistake like that,but my grammar is devastating. So good luck in your endeavour author!
I like the parent the most. They’re so adorably cliche, like husband that look strong but became a weak kitten in front his family, and wife that look gentle and kind lady but you nightmare if angered. The relationship between MC and the god bunch is mediocre, i hope she spent more time with the family and conquered the world.